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Comments of chapter undefined of Creati Hero: All-Father[Completed]

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Dayki
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Потеряла сознание? Как удобно получилось! Автор, ты когда что-то придумываешь, хотя бы в уме прокрути то, что пишешь и подумай, как это выглядит со стороны. У тебя абсурд получается.

123r97
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I hope there's a reason for her passing out that we learn later rather than just 'oh she randomly passed out so she wouldn't hear what happened' because that's just stupid.

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Lomyril
LomyrilLv15Lomyril

He really should have been worried about his sister a lot earlier. Like right when he woke up. Other than that, I thought it was a good chapter.

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DaoistmXBnrL
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Thank you for the chapter

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LeficiosTV
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Thanks for the chapter.

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Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

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Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Gracias por el capitulo

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Wachdog
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interesting

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BEND0VER_420
BEND0VER_420Lv11BEND0VER_420

Tnx for the chapter 🙏

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BattleKing10000
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Marcus_whatever
Marcus_whateverLv2Marcus_whatever

Gud

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TyrantTron335
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First

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

it'd be great for MC to communicate with the spirit of Nana Shimura, bring her back to life, and she becomes his woman plus he upgrades her and all his other harem wives abilities for better family safety 🤩