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Comments of chapter undefined of Providence of the Heavenly Flame

MediocreSkater
MediocreSkaterLv13MediocreSkater

The alchemy in this novel is pretty interesting. One thing to be worried about is the overcomplication of the furnace because alchemists would be too reliant on the various commodities of the furnace they may not train in some other important aspects a traditional alchemists may learn

ShiroN3K0
ShiroN3K0AuthorShiroN3K0

His Azure flame is his normal Qi, I did want to make the flame dual coloured but couldn't get a good result and my editing skills aren't quite good enough, I will definitely look in to getting a proper cover drawn in the future though.

MediocreSkater:Thanks! The new title is definitely better than the previous one and the cover image is pretty good for now, maybe a turquoise flame to represent his unique core flame would be better 🤔. Nonetheless thank you for your hard work!
MediocreSkater
MediocreSkaterLv13MediocreSkater

Providence of the heavenly flame sounds way better and it suits his current situation as well. I also recommend maybe changing the cover to something cooler? Like maybe some immortal world landscape with a lot of bright colors can attract attention pretty well.

Divindade_Fantasma
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Grandmaster, will Shu He have a Dao companion?