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This work has everything to be one of the best here, just our dear author doesn't get discouraged, he's going far,"um recado na minha língua nativa, autor se desanime, viram muitos pra tentarem te derrubar, mas lembre-se, você sempre terá apoios de muitos outros, vários que não vão comentar ou te dar uma crítica, mas que estarão sempre te acompanhando silenciosamente." Good luck

By not turning the protagonist into an idiot later, or doing the same thing you described in the first chapter later, the story will be very good

Obrigado

A born psychopath

I'm already looking forward to seeing what will happen.

Cool, just try not to make the MC too powerful too early in the story

Do you have plans to turn the MC into an ant-hero?

Kkkkkkkm

What can I expect from this?

Of course, this is just my opinion, you really don't need to change the story in any way, because it's great. It was just a preference that I would have accepted better, but it's great the way it is.

Someone a little simple, who didn't see him for his abilities, and who would see him for who he really is, and more importantly was originally from this world would make the story more interesting to read

Let's say I expected him to have a love interest with someone from this world other than his old classmates

Let's see how the story unfolds

Will she be the MC's girlfriend? This is a little disappointing

Tô com preguiça de traduzir essa crítica, mas para aqueles que o entenderem, LEIA ESSA OBRA AGORA. Essa e a ordem do divino..... Se não prepare-se para sofrer eternamente

It fell?

Dude, seriously you put half the context of your story in a simple description? You're crazy..... I'm not going to read it now, I'll leave it for later when there are more chapters .......... don't give up / © ___ ® \✊

I'll be waiting then

It's a little difficult to find the Nexus of the story, but in general when I'm writing this review there are only two chapters and the author is still new,com um pouco mais de polimento no contexto e a forma como você escreve a história vai realmente ficar bom, I hope you don't give up, I wish you luck and all the best, I probably won't comment much as the story progresses because I forget, but I'll always be following the chapters