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Comments of chapter undefined of Inside the Multiverse (Marvel and DC)

CheatLevelPower
CheatLevelPowerLv5CheatLevelPower

Why bandits? It doesn’t really work with modern setting like this story.

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Mah_olliva
Mah_ollivaLv2Mah_olliva

The idea is really good, I'd rather mc follow a smarter path, the system said he gets points for making a change he could literally just invent things that would have a worldwide impact and therefore a lot of points, he would go after Peter without even knowing Right the differences between the fictional heroes and the real world, it just gives the impression that he still thinks it's a fake world in addition to passing on a silly fan idea of ​​the heroes.

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Ozem
OzemLv2Ozem

the idea of ​​the story is good but the execution is flawed to understand that you are a new writer hope it gets better and in the future maybe reedit the chapters I will continue reading to see where it goes I haven't found any real reason to drop it

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Galactic_Sugar
Galactic_SugarLv12Galactic_Sugar

Can you stop calling them bandits please

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

What does it mean he defeats them? What is this a video game where he goes farming rep? Honestly, to be a proper hero, in any world, or setting, there are two ways: 1. Dirty way. Kill those at the top, maim the small fries. 2. Build your own secure prison (if killing is an issue). ie a prison that the government cant use as a free for all power shop (or organizations like Hydra, Cadmus, etc). Anything is not only ineffective its a waste of time reading since its just a repeating cycle, comics do it to save money, reading a novel like that? Pass.