"To me, you are more than a machine"
People don't talk like that. A simple "Who the heck are you?" is enough. The rest is unneeded and just makes this sound too try hard.
Bro, after reading this story Iâm going to have expanded my dictionary multiple times, I will become a lawyer, using words that I donât know mean anything >:)
Bruh. . That feist impression for the MC is the most important for a novel... How old is MC anyway? ?. . He's acting weird and goofy tbh. .. If this goes on it'll be more bland than exciting to read..
