Comments of chapter undefined of VECTOR IN DC

Forced plot which makes mc more stupid, lowers 4 starts to 3 1/2 stars

Might as well end the story here.

This was fun while it lasted, thanks for the fic.

ok I be first to say it Tom is ether having his brain hijacked to make poor decisions, his power which isn't thar much on the grand scale gave way to much self confidence that he really shouldn't have at this time. I'm mean come on a stranger comes to you in the park brings to a unknown bar in Gotham where 60% are ether crazy criminals or often both and he thinks "well he seems like fun let's go " in my opinion some has to be messing with his brain for such smart man to turn reckless

Last couple of chapters have seriously dropped in quality

I mean. When you want to stay anonymous, don’t accept shady jobs that look like a trap and don’t drink with the person who caught you snooping around the place asked in the job. This is really deserved. Tom played this like an absolute idiot.

bro what just like that, wast he like a super genius

Is it weird to hope that he dies and another soul replaces him and becomes the MC? 😂

Man the last two chapters are pretty bad, i mean he's getting a bad feeling but doing absolutely nothing about it. It just seems really dumb

april fools over already

That was just some bad writing author, If I was in that situation without hindsight I would definitely be able to tell it was a trap and you expect me to believe that Tom who supposedly is genius couldn't, seem dumb

I really tried to find a reason to keep reading, like "it's a new phase, I just need to get used to it" or "it's just a bad arc, it'll get better soon", since I've seen a lot of the novels and fanfics have a bad arc, but they get better again, unfortunately that doesn't seem to be the case, and even if it were, the mc being discovered and captured by the Terminator ended the story's chances. It was good while it lasted, goodbye.

What kind of person just ignores all your instincts telling you to run away? Honestly author, the last 2 chapters are letting me down

Mc: i have a bad feeling about this bubbling liquid that is radium geen in colour, with a skull label in it's bottle. BUT I'LL DRINK IT, wHaT cOuLd Go WrOnG??? Mc: i have a bad feeling about this sharp piece of metal covered in rust. BUT I'LL STAB MYSELF WITH IT, im lost & it might take me weeks to get back to civilisation.... wHaT cOuLd Go WrOnG???

this is already becoming very predictable, the MC was kidnapped will free himself and tell himself not to trust anyone again. A girl appears and begins to fall in love, will drop insinuations that he is a ghost or that he is very good at making plans, Batman discovers and defeats him, joins him with the Justice League to manipulate him, I already read this in another story itself plot but with different context

Don’t know if I can trust the author, these last few chapters have been brain rot which is a shame cause it was good but quality has dropped rapidly I would say rewrite last couple of chaps

ever since mc met Raven, he lost quite a bit of IQ, I know Raven is hot but come on she's not tHAt hot!!!! Isnt this pushing it?

you don't even have to be a genius to know that you shouldn't accept anything strange even more so drink, mother teaches that and life teaches you that, besides that it's Gotham, 60-70% of people are thieves or corrupt, anyone won't accept something or go with someone in a bad distant place