Comments of chapter undefined of VECTOR IN DC
VECTOR IN DC
Maverick_DaSupreme
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And there you have it folks. Another story with great potential ruined by an author who doesn't know how to write (hide details within) & ended up sharing everything before it even matters. Man, re-write this chapter. And delete the 10,000 paragraph of ominous feelig & bad BAD setup. Just turn this into another gig & just start the scene at him scouting the building verifying the blueprint. & for God's sake stop worshipping wade & praising land his shadow falls on, he's in disguise. I understand the urge to put him on a pedestal and suc his d... but do it when he is out of his disguise. . . I knew this story was going to be stupidity galore the moment he attended Robin. Your chances can can either be a brilliant thrill seeker or an idiot thrill seeker. This is an eight or kind of situation. & the difference is brilliant one doesn't make Stupid decisions & give into impulses without covering his tracks
😮💨place your bets gentlemen we got mc as player one 😏 deathstroke as player 2 who's up for Talia al ghoul for player 3 😁 come on it would be interesting to see the old demons head take an interest in the mc since he doesn't have a excellent set of CQC skills for player 4 now this would be interesting firefly and Bane sent at the same time one to capture Tom and the other to kill him 🤔guess will find out tomorrow on the next episode of speed race...I mean vector 😗
