Comments of chapter undefined of BNHA: Singularity
BNHA: Singularity
Einlion
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Went to check on the comment I left in the last chapter and it’s not there. Pretty sure it got posted and didn’t have any words that shadow ban your comment usually, so was it deleted? Either way the tldr was it’s now Inko x All might, story now bad, I be gone.
I mean, it's called having a character. sure he may fine her attractive but that doesn't mean he'll sleep with her even if she wants it. I mean it's like trying to sleep with your best friend's sister. Sure you may want to but it's just something most people won't do. bro code and all that. Kind of like the Toga situation. She may want him but he doesn't have to want her back even if he thinks she's hot. some people just have lines they won't cross. that's not a bad thing. it'd only be a bad thing if he established these lines and then broke them for no apparent reason. but as he's been consistent since the first time Inko came on to him, it's mostly your own fault for expecting something different.
Imjustsadnow:No? We had that earlier chapter. Not following through despite that chapter existing is unsatisfying. We literally had Izuku checking out her butt like 2 chapters earlier. Inko initiated the earlier encounter. She’s willing, but the MC despite liking the older women of MHA, despite seeing Inko as a woman, despite being a pervert with a harem; somehow can’t get past that last hurdle with Inko? It makes no sense and just feels forced in order to go through with Inko x All might. He wants her to be happy, he knows she’d be down, yet it just feels forced that for no reason other than it will apparently “complicate” the story he can’t start something with her. It’s the author’s intervention that is preventing Inko x Izuku from happening rather than reasons that make sense character wise.
I think it's going great considering I'm sure you've deviated from the original plan quite a bit by now. I actually wouldn't mind less full lemon chapters from now on too since I mostly skim them anyway. I'd save the full ones for really special events, like Rumi's first time with one or more of the girls or if he eventually does get around to Nemuri. Other than that, It'd be nice to see what his current relationship (sounds weird) with the guys in his class is like too. I can imagine some of them have some mixed feelings about what's going on. Heck maybe even culling the numbers a bit could be fine. Some of them are so forgettable and lackluster that it's more of a pain to remember they are there in the first place. Maybe grab some students from 1-B and form a new class elite class? Either way more interaction with characters outside the harem would be nice, otherwise keep up the great work!
Less lemons is good for now, though I hope they don't completely disappear in the future. As for the story, I've already said I think it's great and really appreciate the compromises and willingness to accept feedback. If there's anything I wanted it'd probably be more time with All Might. Much like the original story, I'm sure there's a lot he could be teaching Izuku. Not just with One for All but just being a pro hero in general. Keep up the good work!
It has felt like this story has been turning into yet another harem s*x story rather than having any sort of plot. I get that people like them but it's kind of just boring. You changed things about the story but then haven't really done much with it. The moment any sort of relationship started it turned into maybe 1 or 2 chapters every 10 of plot drowned in lemons that don't really mean anything to the story.
