Comments of chapter undefined of Mutation Frenzy

I liked the family dynamic in this chapter, and Zen and Anna's determination shines through. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Nicd start

Very very nice world building and introduction of characters [img=recommend]

I like the concept for the story and the hints you placed in this chapter about the wider world was great. I do have a small criticism though. I feel in some parts of this chapter you do world-building naturally like with the news report on the tv and in other parts you just explained things instead of letting the characters hint at it through their dialogue or the environment hint at it. I encourage you to strive for more natural world-building as you have an interesting world to explore.