Comments of chapter undefined of A Marvelous Loop (Discontinued)

plz delete this and go back to marvel, the story was amazing until now, he just needs to stay in marvel for a short while not too long

Ash in his eagerness to avoid answering the questions of the Avengers and thinking he only has to follow the canon events, he accepted the mission when he is tired and not rested properly. So his main weakness seems to be his impulsiveness

yeah this chapter completely ruined the story for me. being impulsive is good, but even an idiot can understand that staying in MCU and getting better was the better choice, and if he was really in mortal danger or couldn't deal with the situation he could have just gone to the loop after being in top form and gear. yeah sometimes making your MC stupid isn't a good idea

well, the author is obviously going to make the mc back to the marvel world, since it has marvel in the name of the book, I just thought it was strange that he made it go to FATE, as there were many other possible paths

Just refuse to answer any of their questions. Or counter with your own. “Are you aware that SHIELD has been infiltrated by Hydra? Why would I tell you anything if it’s just going to be immediately leaked to the enemy?” Bam. Mic drop. That ends the questioning right there. They will be in a rush to disprove you. Bonus points by asking this: “Tony, are you aware that Hydra killed your parents? Have you looked at the footage of their deaths?”

Altough i wanted him to stay in the mcu but its not like this story is suddenly bad because of it He can progress a lot there as shown in this chapter not just by getting a powerful item but also more combat experience and more quirk mastery

This gonna get boring soon

Im so confused last chapter he said he just needs to make sure that everything goes along like in canon and that he knows he cant face Lancer. However now he is for some reason jumping in front of lancer acting like he actually has a shot.

This is gonna be boring if he just goes from world to world every time he finishes a time loop

thx for the chap

can you not stretch the words when yelling because I don't want to read "Nooo!" it's stupid and cringe.

a marvelous loop that left marvel after 10 Dissapointingly cliche chpts.

was hoping for more Marvel focus

thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work 😁👍

The fanfic is wonderful, can't you see it? Why do they question everything Ash does or doesn't do? Still don't understand that before, Ash was JUST an ORDINARY human?

thanks for the chapter looking forward to more

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Never seen the 'Fate' series, so i can't understand what is happening, story and characters, so I lost interest in this fic, it was interesting while it was in Marvel.

thx for the chapter