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Comments of chapter undefined of The Deceitful One

PrehistoricDevil
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Didnt like the future glimpse. Also other gods acting like mobs and no knowledge was just too much. Didnt like the power gap, i understand the he needs to be powerfull but going aganist soo many gods with no tactics but simple spells showed the power gap between gods. I know im basing this off the LOTM and comparing him to klien who had to plan and strategise to fight a group of gods made those gods powerfull on their own and only when weakness was used are they vlunerable but this first glimpse of future shpwed nothing but OPness. I would rather have not seen this chapter.

Gene_Guirand
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You gotta give it a chance. Perhaps he will build up to the OPness. All this chapter was, was just a glimpse

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L_Darkheart
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Huge fan of the LOTM . loved the first chapter .

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movwiz09
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man......it's feels like ...... finally I'm weirdly satisfied with the introduction

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DereckESCL
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ÂĄI LOVE THIS INTRODUCTION! I REALLY LOVE IT! WORDS CAN'T DESCRIBE HOW I FEEL! ÂĄMAN, IT'S SIMPLE AWESOME! I really like your story

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Eclipceborn
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Cool intro!

LostDreamsAndKey
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How does rank 9 compare to a sequence 0? Would the Bryan depicted here be above Error/Door Amon?

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DarkLordLinus
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I think this chapter would be more banger if this was a detective's dream or divination that he made and then you can arrange it to his last moment, that would be sick

ClownxOfxZues
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Ash_Monarch
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Really nice start! 🎉

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Ethel_Imaginations
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MiaSilver
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JulieStrife18
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Mysteries_
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Seriously, the protagonist will have the powers of the character that most gave nightmares to readers of the lord of mysteries lol, looking forward to seeing this.

Xixsu_0278
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ScribeOfTheDamned
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Otis_Atis
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what an intro, can't wait to binge

cringe_maybe
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fireeee

Carl_2434
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I like this already🧐🧐🧐

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