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I like the story so far, it has been developing appropriately, however, it is not without its flaws. For example, with his family, not only did he not share many moments with his mother and he did not explain why, then what happened was also too fast and his subsequent anxiety attack in which he keeps repeating that it is not fair and it's always the same, but the reason why is not explained much until this chapter where it appears that he had a sister in his past life and so on. Other than that, the story has been developing quite well, if you want to continue it, go ahead, but if you want to make another story, continue with that, the important thing is that you feel comfortable with what you write.
I'm not one of those who like the MC to reveal his status as a reincarnate, this has already happened twice and I honestly don't understand the reason behind this decision. Having knowledge of a previous life gives you an advantage, yes it is true that it seems that Queen Charlotte also shares a second life, but that makes it even more imperative to hide it, why would she allow a child who probably has the mind of a adult is with his daughters? It would be too dangerous. Well, for now I'll keep watching what you plan to do with this sequence of events, dear author.
This chapter was surprising, I wasn't expecting a new chapter. I must say that so far it has been surprising, the twists, although somewhat expected since the war and his brothers going to war were mentioned, were expected, but that doesn't make it any less sad to see how Mc loses his family. The thing about Elize was something that surprised me, I didn't expect an older lady to love a child xd haha I guess the affection she has for him is not romantic, but I couldn't help but think so during that scene in the chapter. Honestly, it is the first fantasy novel set in the Edwardian era, here in web novel, that in itself adds points and the plot so far has been interesting. Now it's time to see how the Mc is going to survive from now on.
This is the first review I will do, so bear with me if I don't really know how to develop it, however, I couldn't wait to do it because this novel deserves more recognition and reviews than it currently has. To start, if you are a fan of The Witcher Series and LOTM you will definitely love this novel, the character of Eleazar and his Witcher sequence is the best developed and his progression from weak to strong is quite refreshing to read, he is not all powerful from the beginning , but thanks to all the education he received from his father he manages to overcome his opponents who tend to be stronger than him and even when he becomes strong he is not at the peak of power but instead faces people who are as strong or stronger than him. stronger than him, which guarantees great character and personality development of the character. Fina is a character that at first may worry you with her secrecy and mystery, but she really loves Eleazar and how their relationship develops and the past they share is so great that I simply do not want to address it so as not to give spoilers, however, It is one of the best relationships that have been built throughout the chapters. The world is well thought out and developed throughout the chapters, especially since the protagonist is on constant trips to hunt dark creatures. The sequences with their respective powers and rituals are also, I must say that I am very surprised by the powers that the different paths presented have and their subsequent capabilities, their power system is also quite defined and is explained little by little throughout of the chapters. The plot twists and mysteries were what I loved the most, especially that twist between Eleazar, Fina and Evelea and how unfortunately they must separate, it was ufff...heartbreaking. It really is a well thought out novel that will be enjoyed by everyone and I hope you give it a chance.
So... He can't have a child?:0