Comments of chapter undefined of The Shopkeeper of Konoha

A little intense the owner of the ramen shop xd

without teuchi ossan . i am pretty sure naruto become evil real fast. he the only one that cares about naruto from the beginning

will there be a harem?

where in the world of Naruto there is no orphanage more than one important character in the story and even Naruto only he expelled from the orphanage and a villain of Naruto is also an orphan who lived in the orphanage the apprentice and spy of Orochimaru or Kabuto, I don't know if I'm going to read this story if the guy misses a detail like that, he's sure to miss others.

I thank you for the chapter.

The English quality isn't good enough to write compelling dialogue. Reads like a robot combined with broken English.

Can you remove the term "commoners" please, it doesn't mean what you want to convey and makes the story difficult to understand. The proper term is "civilian" low chakra residents of Konoha are civilians not commoners

[img=recommend] Thank you for the chapter [img=recommend].

Wow, I never know that this old ramen knows to get mad? And not use his ramen talk jutso. Hahaha

Hm

gracias por el capitulo

thabks