Alittlepiggy33
This all happened really fast but I really liked the chapter. Ed showing us what he can do and defending his friend. Also, stan Dwayne ✊🏼 I didn’t think he would be able to get out of the consequences of his driving but good for him I guess x) I hope he will use his fame and money to destroy the producer for what he tried to do, he deserves no less. Thanks for the chapter as always 😁
I thought the kidnapping scene with Ed going to the rescue was a little forced to be honest, but it's some character development from his old life so it's a little better. Hopefully it doesn't turn into a trend of running into danger. That said i still want a small reaction from Sheldon about Ed solving his equation.
I like the old model when it comes to songs, with the old style I connected more easily, but with the new style when writing songs I only paid attention to the first few verses and after that I just ignored the song. This new way of writing the song stops actively involving the characters and becomes environmental music and only filler to increase the number of words
Hi author, when the MC goes on his tour it would be nice if he had several styles of music in the same show, for example rock, pop, jazz and rap. And if you're going to make him rap, you could make him sing a Brazilian rap called "Um homem na Estrada" means "A man on the road" by Racionais MC's, I'm sure it would get great reactions from Claire.