Comments of chapter undefined of Weightless - A One Piece FanFic

There were a few things I wasn't too happy about with this chapter, Doflamingos quote would have been fun to include, Whitebeards declaration of the one piece being real was a great moment but he said it as he died, so it didn't really fit. I found it hard to come up with a good way to make Luffy a rival for my OC, as I am not very good at getting inside a character's mind yet, especially one as empty as Luffys. I guess I could have had Carter say "Get stronger than me, or I will eat all your meat" Anyone who reads this, if you have any constructive criticism, feel free to provide it.

Is this dropped? It was great you should continue or start a new one piece fic😭

It was maby too fast, l think it was not bad to POV by other characters but at least it was good as for me by the way thanks for the chapter.

When do you think you'll update us

Thanks for the chapter!

i like it keep it up

thank for the chapter was a bit short for all the war arc you should maybe make another war arc chapter from other peoples pov to extend it a bit since those that didnt read the manga or been too long since they did could find the story confusing but over all good job

MITO_ Obrigado por compartilhar isso conosco, autor-san. Amei capítulo :)

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the great chapter

Thanks for chapter

Thx for the chapter