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DongLong21dReplied to FaNFiC_Writer_2000He had ping cancer or something and his idiot brain was from war, training should be okay? They did say the warring states period or whatever before villages that the children younger than the academy would go to war so it’s not a one off with itachi?
His father returned after a few days, but then they received news of his grandfather's death on the border of Iwagakure. The family was in mourning. Menma didn't know what to say at the time. He realized for the first time just how serious the ninja world could be. However, as a child, he couldn't work too hard. According to his computer system data, the best age to begin practicing is between four and five years old, when a ninja student enters the academy.- DongLong1mthReplied to G_Gopaul
That anime is cautious hero
No, to live in this world that is threatened by people like the Akatsuki, Black Zetsu, Madara, and Kaguya, one must grow to jonin level just to survive, and kage level to make an impact. - DongLong1mthCommented
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To be honest, he really wanted to masturbate Professor McGonagall and experience anima. Will Gus' hand feel better? - DongLong1mthCommented
The patronus guy right?
There was no Andrius in his memory, and Wayne was a little confused for a moment. - DongLong1mthCommentedCh 81 Todo Aoi’s Challenge
- DongLong1mthCommentedCh 82 Chapter 82
- DongLong1mthReplied to TheOneTrueLoki
Everything is too straight forward and the characterization is bad
Dumbledore nodded in agreement, his eyes alight with approval. "You're quite right, Ciaran. He Who Shall Not Be Named fixation on dark magic blinds him to its limitations. A balanced approach is paramount." - DongLong1mthCommented
i like the idea but not much the character and the his family/family backstory stuff, like if you made him a sacred 28 and got through hogwarts and slowly discovered the changes in the world while getting stronger. I also am not a fan of the child beating a reincarnator which ive seen poorly in some other fics. Im not on the side who just wants u on this fic but im not into this one much aside from the world.
Ch 578 Chapter 1. Awakening (I) - DongLong1mthCommented
Oh
I will release the first five chapters, so tell me your opinion. By the way, I will delete this chapter in 24 to 36 hours. - DongLong1mthCommented
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"Autistic Yuandunbao!" - DongLong1mthCommented
The reader is sad
There are no updates on the chapter today, the writer's mind is empty - DongLong1mthCommented
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the world of martial arts. - DongLong1mthCommented
Ehhh
No matter how awesome Gojo Satoru's unlimited spell is, it will definitely fail. - DongLong1mthReplied to EarthlyNatureLover
The context is wrong
Looking at the clear blue skies covered by trees, I can't help but question the meaning of life that has birthed me, to the second chance that I have been bestowed. - DongLong1mthReplied to EarthlyNatureLoverCh 1 Chapter 1: Fateful Encounter? Nah
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Who is this? Yassop?
"The recent news is very dull..." Jesus' eyes kept wandering over the newspapers, trying to find some entertainment. - DongLong1mthCommented
Well that one string demon cut its own head off and was able to put it back on so maybe not
But there is one thing to say, even without the sword, Chu Yang can kill evil ghosts, but it will be a little troublesome. Without the orangutan scarlet ore to suppress the regeneration ability of ghosts, it is easy to be dragged into a protracted battle by the opponent. - DongLong1mthCommented
No
"My name is Chu Yang, you can call me Yang." In English, the words "Yang" and "Yang" can be read as "Young". - DongLong1mthCommented
17 minutes?
It's like playing a game. You fight a monster with a high profit, but the damage is very small. When you come back, you will kill it in 999 seconds. It feels so good.