Comments of chapter undefined of Dragonball : Super Raditz

You are stretching this unnecessarily long it's starting to get boring. Instead of this one point per chapter why don't you put this whole talk in one chapter.

Death by snu snu underwater, a true warriors death

I will be frank.You ruined another fic.

The MC's attitude now looked like a complete idiot, even though he knew that trunks had only come to the past to help, and that he was not to blame for anything, he simply attacked the boy for simply not accepting that he died and that everyone has to move on.

can you stop with the dramatic pauses and short chapters.

Huh, a tale as old as Las Vegas. Have a fun time and wake up hungover and married to a stripper.

If Ranfan is coming back plz let Pamput, Chappa, Nam and Giran come back as well as Bora and Upa since Upa should be around Gokus Age

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Thanks for the Chapter but What The HELL,Pffftt,Hahahaha🤣

What I never understood is why after dying to the androids that the z fighters didn’t go to king Kai and ask the the name namekian for help???

Good chapter thx

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Hmm, I'm curious about the whole Pie Pie thing. I doubt she did it tho

una gran historia

if I were the protagonist, I would have already taken the dragon balls, kidnapped kami and picolo, destroyed the earth, and then made a wish to recover only the good people or those who have no desire for world domination or destruction

tyfc

Ty

keep it up I love this story please.