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Comments of chapter undefined of Dragonball : Super Raditz

Ed_Kousuke
Ed_KousukeLv3Ed_Kousuke

too many monologue make the reading experience really bad.. can you just use passive sentences tro describe the situation instead of making it a monologue.. btw.. it is nice fanfic tho..

Cultivator_Asura
Cultivator_AsuraLv1Cultivator_Asura

Honestly it's good, but I think the increase in zenkai was too small, considering the injuries, goku in namekusei needed to use kaioken to reach 180 thousand power, right after recovering from the battle against Ginyu, his power increased to three million (this it's canon), so I think that increase was very small, considering he had a HOLE in his chest. Other than that, it doesn't matter much if you are a low or high class warrior, this will not influence the zenkai's power gain much, what really matters is the intensity of the wound and your power level, as seen in the work, the higher your power level, the more you earn in zekai, at least until the base of the trillions (Goku Black is the perfect example of this, he abused zenkai to stay at the same power level as goku and vegeta in ssj blue , and it cannot be said that ssj rose is stronger than blue, it has already been confirmed that it is not), and the power gain through training, being from a low or high class shouldn't matter much either, Vegeta as it has already been shown both in the anime and insinuated by Whis, he trains harder than Goku, and not really he is stronger, and detail, Goku is a low class kkkk, so if you are not a mutant saiyan like Broly, the effects are not very different, regardless of your class at birth, this only serves to tell your battle level at birth. born, not the Saiyan's true potential.

ImagineMaker
ImagineMakerAuthorImagineMaker

Broly and Raditz's armour design.

LastDragon77
LastDragon77Lv1LastDragon77

Hm, its cool fixing his armor and all, i just don't understand why he cares, i mean, even Vegetas armors got cut by Yajirobe sword, if you ask me, he should go for the bikers like suit vegeta used during the Boo saga, the armor can't really protect him from anything significant, and since his underwear and armor are made of the same material, he should make a bunch of thin suits just for the sake of not going naked while he is on the oozaru form.

Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

The author doesn't seem to know how Saiyan powers work the power increase was ridiculously low, they also don't take that long to recover from an injury and being low class doesn't influence zenkai, it's just the power level they were born with isn't it not even about potential, training is not very productive for them the increase in power is not that great, they get stronger fighting, training only serves to learn pro Saiyan techniques.

Akatsuki_3559
Akatsuki_3559Lv4Akatsuki_3559

Bruh the scouter is still connected to frieza force dude

SwordDomainGod1
SwordDomainGod1Lv13SwordDomainGod1

The power level is incorrect, please change it.

Sohjua8
Sohjua8Lv1Sohjua8

Why is he talking out loud to himself all the time. 'Its very jarring' said Sohjua.

Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv2Dragon_forever

Radits x bulma

Pietro_kenway
Pietro_kenwayLv1Pietro_kenway

Se o vegita se encontrar com o Raditz atual, é bem possível que o vegita o mate, afinal o vegita disse que o mataria se chegasse na terra enquanto Raditz estivesse vivo.

TheEvilDragon23
TheEvilDragon23Lv4TheEvilDragon23

Really like the story. Is the new cover possibly a hint at romantic interest?

Federico_De_Baggis
Federico_De_BaggisLv1Federico_De_Baggis

NOT BAD

Zeno
ZenoLv5Zeno

Your tracker should be put away, and only use it until you can read the ki, as Frieza's army is spying on you through it, and they may wonder how you survived.

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Lord_Disaster
Lord_DisasterLv4Lord_Disaster

will there be a harem?

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

TachibanaShiro
TachibanaShiroLv5TachibanaShiro

Reading!

Natanael486
Natanael486Lv4Natanael486

Thanks for the chapter

Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv2Dragon_forever

Thanks for the chapter

Wachdog
WachdogLv4Wachdog

It shows that the author is putting all the wisdom to this fanfic