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Sohjua81yrCommentedEven an the worlds best expert in anything couldn't use 'precision and exact' in any kind of crafting with tools that he made from the scratch.
With a small knife, Cain began to peel and core the berries, cutting them to the same size on a chopping board using the system's calculations, removing all the excess parts of the berries, and then crushing the berries to remove impurities. The pulp of the Dark Berry and Speed Berry were added first, stirred with precision before the other supplementary berries were added one by one, according to the system's instructions. The amount of each ingredient, the order in which the ingredients were added, the timing of the stirring, and the intensity at which the ingredients were stirred all needed to be exact. Such strict requirements meant that few people were capable of making Pokeblocks efficiently.- Sohjua81yrCommented
There is no way way he could have made impurity separators, compressors and condensers. How he gets said items is never explained. The Rocket base could have easily been used as a way to get the items or the base had the tools he needed and he used points to buy or rent what he needed. I like the story so far but pokeblock production is really bad.
Ch 10 Chapter 10: - Sohjua81yrCommentedCh 2 New armor
- Sohjua82yrCommentedCh 351 Interrogation
- Sohjua82yrCommentedCh 349 Weeding Out
- Sohjua82yrCommentedCh 349 Weeding Out
- Sohjua82yrCommentedCh 347 Für das Größere Wohl
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A MC that can just self learn abilities that he never had in his past life easily without training or effort is just plain bad storytelling. Want to have perfect control over my body? done. Want to learn nen without any knowledge on how to do it? 'Will do it later as to not freak others out'. Want to learn Zetsu? ' I know how and can do it anytime I like.'
Ch 2 Awakening I - Sohjua82yrCommentedCh 346 Two Met, One Left
- Sohjua82yrReplied to dadaoistCh 1 I'M ...
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I really enjoyed the novel for a while but some of the things that happened felt jarring to me. The way that age and growth was done was too illogical to me. The MC has the mentality of a 30 year, the age of a 4 year old and the body of an eleven year old. The final straw was when the MC was allowed to adventure on his own off his parents property. Sorry but no parent should let a 4 year old who still says 'Mommy' to wander around alone. Otherwise the quality of writing is good and the world building is decent. By no means is this a bad novel. Its just not for me.
- Sohjua82yrCommentedCh 68 CH7 (68), Excursion Begins
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Correct me if I am wrong, but didn't it say in earlier chapters that Rose was a year older than the MC. But here it says she is 6 but he is 4.
She excitedly asks them and after getting their permission, she put Nyx down before crouching down herself to hug his Nidoran and pet them. She then points towards their parents and asks me if they are my Pokemon as well. I nod and tell her that they are Seb and Gaia's parents. Rose makes impressed sounds that do not make me feel proud. I definitely did not feel proud of myself for impressing a 6-year-old little girl. A few minutes later our parents call us over and we bid my Pokemon, that were staying home, goodbye, before leaving for Honey Park. - Sohjua82yrCommented
It should be Aya instead of Arya
This paragraph has been deleted. - Sohjua82yrCommentedCh 8 Ch8, New Start (3)