DaasWolfe
That was a good chapter. I liked the uniform comparisons to special forces and noting it was a future innovation being introduced. Needs to be more use of future developments to show his own origin.
I am always open for discussions in fact, I am happy when you guys share your ideas with me, which helps me improve and add new ideas that I may have missed, as well as fill in some plot holes I left. [img=recommend]
0Eitan0:sorry if it's to big of a comment. just wanted to leave my ideas in hopes that you used them or be inspired by them.