Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

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Jims_RidLv4Jims_Rid

All this training stuff is getting boring. Luffy is getting too overpowered such that unless you pull off some stuff like giving Buggy haki or whatever, he will breeze through the first half of the Grand Line.

11mth

Jims_RidLv4Jims_Rid

the problem is that there's no challenge in that. To make a good story, there has to be a challenge

DaoistGatsu973:And that's what we want, or at least what I want. As I'm not a masochist, I hate to see the hero get beaten up simply because he didn't want to train long and hard enough.

6mth

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Zer0elHuskyLv2Zer0elHusky

Dear author, for the love of all that is wholesome, can you please correct the spelling errors? It would make my reading, and that of many, more pleasant. PS: the name of the technique is Tekkai, not Tekkie.

1yr

Spike009Lv4Spike009

Too many fillers. When is cannon going to start

1yr

AngelShadow2Lv2AngelShadow2

Thx for the chapter

2mth

KurotoLv5Kuroto

Thanks for the chapter!

4mth

Brian70707Lv14Brian70707

you need to edit the chapters more multiple times seen simple mistakes for example saying that plenty of people can do something when you meant they couldn't

1yr