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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Never Die Twice

danty
dantyLv4danty

It really did feel edgelordy. Personally when someone I wasn't too close with died I remember feeling somewhat amused about the whole situation. A little surprised and out of place. Personally I think most people would be given a third of inheritance away, simply because of rumors spreading about being a cheapskate. Also gives them an excuse to leave the house, or he could move out instead. The way he handled it was really immature and unprofessional.

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Thieving
ThievingLv13Thieving

Was skeptical about this novel but gave it a chance. This chapter is my best so far. A breath of fresh air to see a Naruto fic where the MC suddenly forgets their real parents and acknowledges strangers who aren’t one. You will lose readers, yes. But you will also gain readers…example here. I just pray this MC doesn’t suddenly deviate from his goal and completely lose his rationality. Good work

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SpackRox
SpackRoxLv13SpackRox

I liked the chapter. It shows that MC really does care about his life more than anything else. You have justified his thinking and actions. Good work author. Don't listen to those who complain about it. I really love the direction this story is taking.

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ReadFalcon
ReadFalconLv4ReadFalcon

While I get the whole 'not my real dad' thing, they still had a good relationship. This could of been an opportunity to develop the character more, by having him shocked at how the death affected him. Instead the focus was on the step-mom in this weird edgelord power trip. Really like the world building but the MC lacks depth, just feels like a typical shallow power-fantasy character.

Diogo_Barreto
Diogo_BarretoLv13Diogo_Barreto

Nah, we like it. Keep it up. Family relations are good, but the grind is better.

Leylin_Farlier99
Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

thanks for the chapter man and this, I like this development much better. Like Mc wasn't like this when he first arrived, but this world, it has changed him for better it seems, he is doing what is best for his survival and it was clearly stated that he doesn't have much attachment to his new body's father, so idk why people would be upset. have my power stones for keeping it realistic.

Falangeallntrusion
FalangeallntrusionLv11Falangeallntrusion

Thanks for the chapter. He lived up to my expectations of my thoughts on his character.

DaoistaYohan
DaoistaYohanLv1DaoistaYohan

O único defeito é que o MC é muito repetitivo nas frases dele!

LittleVamp
LittleVampLv4LittleVamp

Thanks 👍

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1timeawayfromstress

good chapter.at the end a logical mc,mc brain works.finally a good novel.

skyhound
skyhoundLv14skyhound

His feelings for Hagiro makes sense given his real parents and the little time they spent together. So gratitude and some sympathy is warranted. I do hope he gets some character development. Specifically in finding someone or a cause worthy for him to risk his life for.

ptbv
ptbvLv11ptbv

thanks for the chapter

Coldman
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Hellside
HellsideLv2Hellside

Tnks for chap