Think Grindelward is the bigger lapse in judgement.

Solid FF. Simple writing style but has minimal mistakes (the plural for Pokemon is also Pokemon, does need an 's'. Cool world building. Characters are a little one dimensional and the banter doesn't fit the age profiles but still a decent read.

You're doing well, this review was not intended to criticise. As this is also a translation, I can recognise that some of the differences or strange concepts come from the original text. Keep up the good work, best way to learn is to do.

Not horribly written, good for a non-native writer. But lacks the nuances of English language and culture. Doesn't do justice to the source material, just uses them as a setting.

Got so caught up in thic fic that I forgot to check how many chapters there were. So used to good Pokemon fics having hundreds of chapters I was caught off guard. Please keep up the good work. Immediately moving on to your kther works to see if they are the same quality.

Not loving the new persona. Hoping the change is deliberate and this is a negative biproduct of messing with his emotions that he will try to fix at some point.

Hoping to see him start to find his path in next Arc. Guessing he will find his talent in Genjutsu and that the speed he learned Clone Jutsu was to foreshadow this.

One of my favourite fanfics I've ever read. Went ahead and finished reading it on original thread. Thank you so much for introducing it to me. Such a good SI story, perfect balance between taking advantage of foreknowledge without being OP, great use of ripples and one the best written OCs (Ivar) I've seen. Any other fic recommendations similar to this, please let me know.

Been wondering how your going to manage the timeline with him having met Garp so soon after Rogers death. With Garp having to track down and help with Ace/Rogue and settle him.

Would take a meaningful relationship which prompts character development over the boring Harem power fantasy any day of the week.

Fair warning, it's a little cringey. The depiction of Kakashi will be difficult to read for some people who are fans of Naruto. All the characters are written with the same voice/inner monologue so is a little hard to read for me personally. However this fic does have some cool concepts, so if your not off put by the writing style, give it a read.

Shocked by how good this is. The title made me expect some poorly translated power fantasy fic but this fic is solid. Great interpretation of the system, gives the character so much potential without making him OP. Keep up the good work.

Pretty cool concept but is pretty messy with all the different techniques and system features the author borrows from dozens of different sources. The English is a bit rough but is still readable. This fic does fall into the pitfall of making most of the adults seem stupid while trying to make the MC look cool. Could be worth a read if you like crossover system fics and don't mind the rough writing.

Really like the power scaling, Akio having the leg up in his learning speed but Minato having much better execution. Actually hope it's a long time til he catches Minato.

Love the chapter, its great getting to see some of the character's depth.

Writing quality is decent but template system power scaling is always a little flawed and limits character development. But if you like template system fics, then give this a read, as it is better than most.

I get the angle your trying to take but just doesn't feel real. He can feel fear while still feeling some loss. Even without using the loss, the focus of this chapter wasn't on his fear of death, just his pursuit of power and getting rid of his step mom. This could of been an opportunity to focus on that fear and that this death is a wake up call. I've been enjoying the fic, just worried its galling into the power grind pitfall. Gaining power isn't his goal, he just needs power in order to achieve it. Also hopes he eventually develops a reason to live other than fear of death.

While I get the whole 'not my real dad' thing, they still had a good relationship. This could of been an opportunity to develop the character more, by having him shocked at how the death affected him. Instead the focus was on the step-mom in this weird edgelord power trip. Really like the world building but the MC lacks depth, just feels like a typical shallow power-fantasy character.

Such a great read. First time I've ever given 5 stars for writing quality. Would highly recommend. Please keep them coming.

Not a fan of you taking this angle. There's other ways to create his backstory without going the pedo route.