PilgrimJagger
I'm sorry I can't 🤣. I ain't finna memorize all this. maybe if I read it, it would be easier to understand, but this is just so off-putting for me. Maybe I'll try this later, so I'll just bookmark it for now. I understand trying to be unique, but I feel this is overly complicated a bit, especially when someone just wants a light read like me and doesn't want to use what little brain power I have to remember this ranking system.
Honestly I would of done this without the Greek…. Just do F1F to A54A. Requires less mental jump from reader. I agree with some other readers that complicated isnt always good and unique. Anyways haven’t read yet. If books good I can ignore it. Will see. I generally don’t like novels that have inborn powers (abilities) like my vampire system. Just not for me. The ONLY one that’s done it for me is Shadow Slave (and boy did that one do it for me..). Hope this one is good though
I don't understand how this works.. let's leave the Greek alphabet aside.. How do neural connections reduce mana consumption? As I understand it, the mana is stored in the crystal. With the help of a neural connection, mana leaves the crystal and enters the body, making it stronger. also, when mana leaves the crystal and enters the body, it begins to interact with the person's genes, activating the ability. thus, the more neural connections, the more mana can leave the crystal, the greater the physical strength, and the more power the ability can manifest. Let's say 1 neural link releases 10 mana per second, two neural links will release 20 mana per second. etc. Or am I wrong and everything is working wrong?
Why use Greek alphabets,, am sure most of the readers are not familiar with the alphabets to know it's chronological order,, heck, u say sigma, I know it's last,, u say ni, how many levels higher than sigma is this one,, u say vi, is that like the 4th scale or 5th. With 54neuro links,, it's going to be 18 levels of 3neurolink each,, using Greek alphabets is not wise, it will only break immersion trying to figure out how many scales he has pass through and how many still remain. Again try and show the status like every 3 or 4 chapters, it's better than just telling us areas he progressed in and all that
whenever i see power rankings in story i just skip over them because they dont mean anything to me. u could list off 2 rankings one that in each 3 was ranked the highest and the other ranking the lowest in 3 rankings and i would still read the story thinking "i wonder who the stronegest is" like im not going to be worried that hes ranked lower because i have no idea