Why use Greek alphabets,, am sure most of the readers are not familiar with the alphabets to know it's chronological order,, heck, u say sigma, I know it's last,, u say ni, how many levels higher than sigma is this one,, u say vi, is that like the 4th scale or 5th. With 54neuro links,, it's going to be 18 levels of 3neurolink each,, using Greek alphabets is not wise, it will only break immersion trying to figure out how many scales he has pass through and how many still remain. Again try and show the status like every 3 or 4 chapters, it's better than just telling us areas he progressed in and all that

is that Gene don't normally upgrade,,? otherwise why would the orphanage sell him out immediately when it's known he has FGrade🤔🤔

not a 16yrs from earth, that's for sure,,, he should act like his experience dictates

it's ok,, after all she recovered her memory all at once,, it's ok to be in denial and change, even those that lived through those tyms changed, much less her,

I would have read her memory twice over,, just once was never going to be enough to quell my suspicious if I had doubt,,, it's not like he doenst know memory can be tempered with and also some parts hidden to be triggered by a certain word or action.

I knew it was going to be a problem anyway,, seeing as a fragment of consciousnes was used to make the Oracle AI,, I sure knew author was going to spin this one on us,,, it's not like a simple proper AI without any emotion couldn't do a better job of guidance 🤦🤦

tiring to read🤔,,, what about reading the soul memory to get info about the breath...? what about the spirit aura, is that also increasing or is it just the life aura...??

read up to here so far, so I have a couple of questions I would like to know. 1. why the need to have a duplicate of someone's conscious to serve as AI, to supposedly guide the newbies when their memories are locked and answers they can give restricted to authority levels and also the fact u said at earlier chapters they can't make plans for the person. why not simply create a standard AI then🤔 2. the govt had 22yrs to prepare, no announcement, just a subtle game to pick their own elites, they could have had a number of ways to make more people interested in such games without actually telling them about an impending soon🤔 why they never initiated physical or martial art in schools is something else,, they can make up any reasons to make it sound like it's important without spilling the beans 🤔 3. MC's cousin that works in the government,, why she never hinted the guy to take up practical classes b4 and after the Oracle came is something else,, she ought to know something atleast, even the Dad needed Jake to prompt him 😒 4. is Ruby Hales really going to be a soul mate,, how did the coach come to such a conclusion, and why didn't her own coach prompt her on this back then,, or was it just another process to raise his social life🤔 5. his friend Paul said his coach believes he(Jake) is his ticket to survive, and yet here we are, no trace of him all the way till now🤔 6. how can playing a game created by earth govt be seen as a criteria to raise someone's rank arbitrary just like that,, thought it was said u had to kill one of this things to even reach rank 1, I get Jake was almost at 100% b4 he killed that thing,,, the issue here is that the percentage started counting after he got the Oracle and this was by seemingly doing ordinary everyday activity, missions created by the said Oracle( coach). but those other people didnt have Oracle, no coach to give them missions etc,, if activities they perform in a virtual environment could raise their ranks,then the activities u had been doing prior to b4 u get the Oracle device had to count, and catapult ur rank as well🤔 7. dream aether strengthens what is, and the encoded parameters effectively covers the entire body functions(SACVIP),, how come after all the points they added, they still can't see in the dark during the attack, seeing in the dark is just a matter of capturing the faint traces of light in a seemly dark room,, it can't possibly be that hard🤷, when my bro had hypersensitivity, he could sometime be reading in the dark without actually knowing it's dark to the rest of us🤔 ur writing is solid though,, weldon,🙌🙌🙌

how is having a single being control more than one elements not breaking the balance 🤔

it will be nice if you can reduce the amount of fillers like pointless conversations that drag on and on, taking up multiple chapters just on a simple everyday conversation,, or stressing fight scenes over so many chapter.

have we ever seen a dragon before, or nine heaven? why are they fond of using such analogies we can't even picture

System fairness is kinda weird, what's stopping parents from uploading powerful weapons for sale at a very low price and restricting sale to only their child.