Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Noooooo I wanted to know his choice!!! Well whatever. I really think you're doing good so far so I hope you do take suggestions but still keep your opinions in higher level, as for some suggestions... mmm, it would be cool to make nowa "real" team, one that will remain, it will help to make the story more interesting, also I wish Takuma was more decisive in what objectives he want to achieve, cuz till now he has been pretty much following the flow, with great hardworking from his part but still, and, that's it I think, thanks for the hard work writer-san!

Hoping to see him start to find his path in next Arc. Guessing he will find his talent in Genjutsu and that the speed he learned Clone Jutsu was to foreshadow this.

Mc will use a sword like his master ? (i dont undestand why he didn't use any weapons )

I would like to see Takuma actually work towards a goal. I know his end goal is to be strong enough to survive. But to what end? Just surviving isn't living. I hope Takuma realizes that. And does he actually have a road map to get that strong. I mean regular jonin are fodder in the 4th war. And at this rate, with no underlying goals or strategy Takuma wont even get to jonin level by then. I mean Takuma doesn't even know what kind of shinobe he wants be yet. The way he is obsessed with improving bit by bit, I would expect him to do more experiments with chakra and basic jutsu to leverage any knowledge he has from his experience in his past life. Even if he doesn't, or will never steal bloodlines, one could easily leverage high school level physics and chemistry to make extremely powerful jutsu. Especially with a major earth affinity and minor water affinity. He was coming uo with ideas of how to leverage the transformation jutsu when he learned it. Even though that never worked out, how come we didnt see him go through the same thing with the 2 new jutsu he learned. Regarding relationships I would like to see a romance form with a pure civilian. Mainly because we don't see that often in naruto fanfics. But also because in his previous life he was a civilian and I would like to see him struggle a bit more with his changing ideologies. Maybe a civilian romance could keep him grounded?

Hi thank you for your chapter and for answering your question it would be nice if there was a second sensei in addition to the first who would teach him in depth a shinobi discipline since a lot of people came to see his match including jonin (like Genjustu, Taijutsu , Fuinjutsu or even Kenjustsu). And honestly it would be nice if he found a long-term goal and was less on edge. One thing that would be even better for MC is to find someone his age to be his/her best friend to watch his back and make him less alone.

Some kind of interaction with one of the jonin trained genin, one antagonistic, one friendship(or more idk)

of all affinity he get the lame one

Why Earth had to be his affinity bruh

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

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Honestly feel this is the first time I’ve seen a MC in a naruto fiction with earth as their main affinity, can’t wait to see what you do with it

thanks for the chapter

I love the earth element, never really explored. Maybe he could do some alchemy jutsu and transmute earth into different things like gun powder or deodara style explosions

Elemento Tierra: Jutsu de Ocultación como un Topo

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.