Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

I am all for slow pace but this is going no where feels nothing is happening

I’ll check up on this story later in the future. I get that it’s a slow burn, But it’s going nowhere fast and it’s actully regressing and turning into one of those pity fics at this point

Dude cmon please, something. its getting hella annoying. if his characters like yuta he should have triggered cursed energy from so many negative emotions he is bottling inside him

Boring

i really enjoyed your previous work. but this is very boring. seems like the mc is regressing. the mc really has nothing that makes me want to like them so far. with quin i loved instantly. this mc is just pitiful. i'm going to let this build up for a bit. i shall come back in a month hopefully something might happen that makes me want to continue reading. if i could stick through the sin vault arc. i can make it through this. best wishes Jack x

Whole lotta crying about a not so sad life with very little progress emotionally or physically

for story too be liked there needs some things too be hoping you reel the fishing rod to catch a fish your MC have nothing only problem problem with memory (don't have the body memory can't use his original memory because nothing useful on this stage) problem with skill (last in the class for every practical subjects that have anything with ninja) problem with monetary (not enough to get anything except food that was still not enough) problem with mentality (you make him get panic attack just overthinking + 6 day coma) problem with time (to little time to progress before graduation) problem with politic (no native Konohagakure his parents only outsider merchant possible spy off another village) your MC is breaking apart with no hope not even a little

I get you wanted to do a flip from your last two OP mc’s, but you went to far the other way! He’s plain boring!! From his lack of talent to his thought process, he’s boring with no redeeming qualities. The eternal gennin was a cool choice at first, but the mc barely improved still, and the character is just as bland as the mc. Please either give him a crumb of talent in ANYTHING, or do a timeskip to where he not constantly moping about being bad.

trash

i didn't expect to be the voice of the minority but I'm not minding the slow build up. it feels consistent and valuable to read (I don't feel the need to skip). True: nothing spectacular happening yet (although many exceptional events did) but I'm enjoying the journey

I will trust in you author. You made that knb fic so this has to be somewhat good.

Panic attack.... cheap drama when its a death world

I love this story so far. I know for some that its a little slow but to me its the perfect pace. Ive read plenty of naruto fanfics where the mc gets as strong as itachi within the first 5-20 chapters so this is good experience to have something a little more realistic. Not to mention I dont expect him to be as strong as naruto in his prime by the time naruto becomes a genin, if ever.

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

I think the story is hella good! You seriously play with my mind when inoichi check his mind hahahhaa! But tbh I’m sure inoichi checking and hokage come to hospital is too…forceful? It’s a tad but illogical if yknow what I’m saying BUT nevertheless this is still very good tbh. I’ve read some op pokemon fan-fic lately, it’s annoying!

Exp

speed up ..

Meh I'll be dropping this one for a long time, I'll come back once story actually gets going.