Comments of chapter undefined of The Reincarnator's Tavern
The Reincarnator's Tavern
GnomeBob
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The loosening restrictions of the Force came a bit out of nowhere. Could you expand on that a bit in the next chapters?
I really hope it gets a more in depth explanation, maybe something about more of an understanding of the force and its wants/needs, I feel like saying the force likes him just kinda feels wrong. Or maybe a new and updated code, just something to do with why connection is stronger other than he's spent more time with it. Maybe give us a chapter thats something like the one when Ray was constantly meditating trying to come to an understanding with the force and created his code. Idk it feel like we haven't had anything really force dedicated since the beginning of the story. Also gotta say that I'm loving this and this isn't a complaint, just stuff that I would love to see.
GnomeBob:That will get explained later. Remember the "The Force is a High School" comparison? The basic summary is, "the popular kid in school can get away with anything."
Kinda hope you do more with the force. If I'm remembering everything right everyone has their own unique presence within the force, so I hope we get more descriptions of people based on the way the feel. Also force guidance is really op. If I'm remembering right again, before people found out ways to navigate the galaxy in star wars with tech it was force users who would find safe paths sitting the stars. Its why the Skywalker name is so important, it what they called force sensitives in the past. Also force guide can be used to make blind hyper-space jumps aka not using hyperspace lanes. I could totally be wrong about all that though
Whenever you get to the Naruto world, please straighten up facts just like you did here. There are so many Naruto fanfics out there that people tend to take pseudo knowledge as facts. For example. In canon, when Naruto talked to his mother within the seal, she mentioned that the reason Kushina was in Konoha was because there was a civil war in Uzushiogakure. She said that their people have the tendency to be savage. Imagine a village full of Naruto that gets angry when they get insulted. Normally, Naruto doesn't get violent but imagine other Narutos egging him on and is equally annoyed. (Sidenote: I searched an image Uzushiogakure. Their village looked like ruined modern skyscrapers. Not only were they good at seals but they are also ahead in technology. I bet most of the incongruent technology seen in Naruto came from Uzushiogakure. It's even possible that they used Shadow clones to fasten their technological level than any other village. But instead of using the power of a bijuu to heal their heads from the use of Shadow clones, they use a seal instead. Afterall, where do you think the Hyuuga got their Caged Bird Seal from?) Later on, the Uzumakis are massacred because the other villages took advantage of their civil war to exterminate them. Which made Kushina the only viable Jinchuriki available. Konoha aren't able to help because they can't involve themselves with inside problems of other villages even if they were allied. By the time they found out about he invasion, the Uzumakis are already dead. It also explains why there are no Uzumaki root members. Danzo would have at least taken the kids in his Root program if he ever knew. Also, it's why Itachi killed his clan. If there was ever a civil war, Konoha would fall. The Uchiha clan would have been massacred or worse whether they won or not. Uchiha wins, Konoha's crippled and full of indignant survivors. Konoha wins, Konoha's crippled and full of vengeance ridden survivors. The Uzumaki is already a precedent. It also explained why Kiri hid the fact that they have a rebellion.
I think this was explained before, but it's been a while so I don't remember. How are you going to have the MC fight DB players? I'm sure that they will be reaching up into the thousands, tens of thousands, and probably further in the future, so unless you eventually give the MC star-level+ strength and FTL+ speed, he will fall behind massively. Or you could nerf them once they get to the MCU. Also, will DBS be canon in the Warrior universe? If so, that would mean an extreme power imbalance between players once the Warrior players reach that stage.
OK finally read to current chapter ... so got a few questions. 1. Can they pay to get followers from the worlds like pay for someone to be resurrected as a loyal follower like a contract in payment for resurrection (Shizuka dying was such a waste she was a prime hunter x hunter waifu *cough cough* I mean has a useful storage ability.) 2. Can they go to other worlds even if they don't have the initial class ... like buying ki manipulation then going to dragon ball world? (because f vegeta him getting bulma was bs in my opinion... he killed multiple numbers of her friends (technically, it was nappa, but he was willingly wanting to do it.) He was also an a**. 3. Will him and bookworm become a couple?
