Comments of chapter undefined of My Roleplay System

My Roleplay System

Lagaru

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Magrijack_2Lv15Magrijack_2

Overall, the premise of the story is really interesting. The character has an extremely inconsistent personality, and while it’s explained as the system changing it to fit the role, it would be nice to get some sort of description of the class he chooses, so we readers know what to expect. When I read “Master of Fate”, I expected a string-puller in the shadows, not a blood-frenzied monster. Maybe you were including “Assassin” in his personality, but even so, I would expect his main class to take precedent, right? When I read “Mage”, I expect some sort of scientist, or maybe someone with extreme focus. If it turns out this version of a mage is ‘I enjoy killing even more, but with magic’, then I will begin to take issues with your book, Author-San. If I have misunderstood your system, please explain it, because right now, it’s hard to reckon with.

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LagaruAuthorLagaru

advice is noted, in the future I'll try to add in a description of each class.

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Origin_SaintLv13Origin_Saint

looking forward to more, well-done

1yr

MehmehmehLv15Mehmehmeh

….I’m not a fan of the MC changing personalities so often and even less of a fan of unfeeling psychopath MC but alas I paid for 10 chapters in advance, wish I could get a refund guess I’ll just finish reading what I paid for and move on *heavy sigh*

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Bojetta_SmithLv15Bojetta_Smith

I find myself totally hooked on this story. Lake's character is excellent. Every move he makes is calculated. The development of his path since gaining the system has held me gripped to each page. So I have paid for all the upcoming chapters, it is from my point of view very worthwhile.

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