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Comments of chapter undefined of Cyberpunk: Arasaka Secret Son

Bobby_Schmurda
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so this is decent but it seriously needs you to go back over these earlier chapters and ficlx them. theres so much mussing words and bad grammar its honestly unreadable. loiking ahead to the latest chapters, you definitely get better, so you need to go over these earlier chapters and fix them up.

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ButYThough
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Johny Boi

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Someone_was_here
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Thanks for the chapter. I liked it. I hope you don’t abandon this fanfic

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TheLittleGirl
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Reading! - Another Oof, now for the Arasaka Family.

Armand
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thanks for the chapter

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Gerier
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Futalord
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I feel like Alt's iq was severely dropped just so this back story can exist. Still looking forward to read!

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The_Founder
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pretty sure she'd be killed or soulkilled for this in current canon

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Sangre60Tenibris
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Thanks for the chapter

Iskarriot
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That's a bit too much. It was enough that MC is Hanako's son. Throwing in Silverhand is too much of a coincidence to be believable. Silverhand wouldn't even care about her in the first place, he would just treat her as an excuse to kill some Maelstrom guys and then leave. Even choosing Morgan Blackhand would be much more believable

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Jordon_B
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Oof. Somehow the grammar got way worse in chapter 2 and 3 than it was in chapter 1. Hope it improves again soon.

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Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Subject080
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Saw it coming! xD

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ZJAY_1
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i called it

theanimemail
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out of curiosity, why are you using < _____> to show dialogue in place of the commonly used quotes (i.e., "____").

AvidReader962
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