webnovel
avatar

Comments of chapter undefined of HP: The Otherworlder

altalt

HP: The Otherworlder

BS6SC

Chapter comments14

Author liked the comment.

Magus_Mxviil
Magus_MxviilLv3Magus_Mxviil

Crouch is fun and you conveyed his power well. If Peter had to go because he'd negate Edmunds usefuleness, why did Crouch get to stay? Crouch is far more competent and loyal than Peter which makes him a greater threat, in addition to being a valuable teacher.

1yr
1
BS6SC
BS6SCAuthorBS6SC

Guess you’re gonna have to keep reading to find out… hahaha. The answer will come after a long time, a very very long time, but there is a valid reason, I promise.

1yr
2
Joe_momma
Joe_mommaLv4Joe_momma

This fanfic adds a whole new side to the death eaters. It makes them seem more human and less like retards

1yr
8
Mlnt
MlntLv4Mlnt

Good chapter

1yr
1
Insane_Fantasy
Insane_FantasyLv4Insane_Fantasy

tftc~~

7mth
DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

What happened to him being able to dodge 14 attacks simultaneously while blindfolded? to him not being able to dodge one man, even if he's talented and a genius, Enmund should still be able to dodge and evade when not able to attack.

1yr
EmaCnDf
EmaCnDfLv4EmaCnDf

Sorry for asking, but this is a time travel story? I only read the sipnosis i want to know if this is the focus of the story. Thanks for answering, i have read once a story of 80 chapters and at the 81 chapter when everything was going good, the writter threw a timeloop, it was really hateful, 15 chapters after the backlash of the "twist" he deleted the story.

1yr
INDRA32
INDRA32Lv5INDRA32

Thanks for the chapter

1yr
FAMHDTVPNG
FAMHDTVPNGLv3FAMHDTVPNG

thanks for the chapter

1yr
jasss22
jasss22Lv14jasss22

Thanks for the chapter

1yr
5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter

1yr
watzJ
watzJLv4watzJ

Thanks for chapter~

1yr
Vibez_
Vibez_Lv4Vibez_

Thanks for the chapter

1yr
Login