Draugzel
I like this story, however the mc's line of reasoning is too long. There is a lot of internal monologue filling the chapter, the plot on the other hand seems to move very slowly, which makes for a tiring read. My opinion is that I could make the line of reasoning more summarized, or write it in intervals. For example, just before he leaves for another realm, write his reasoning explaining why he is going to another realm. I like this story, if my opinion can help, it doesn't hurt to try.
thanks for the chapter. In overlord there are 12 dragon lords with platinum dragon lord being the strongest right, so why not just use the world item downfall of castle and country that the mc will get once he helps shalltear defeat the black scripture and capture them after all if it worked on shalltear it should work on platinum dragon lord that way he is now a member a nazarick and can help kill the other dragon lords.