Crownedclown
I am very disappointed with this work. Mainly because of the cowardice of the author. It's as if he's afraid to change the plot, but at the same time he tries to cram something new into it. It doesn't make any sense at all. In fact, the original plot will be better than what the author has crammed into his work. What's the point of writing fan fiction if you're so afraid to change the plot. Just so that in the end the main character will stick every woman or girl at work?