Sorry. Unfortunately, I can't recommend anything. All works on Rick and Morty usually have an interesting beginning, but they either rush or slide into complete shit.

I don't like this Zabini. Our Snape wants more. True, pure and unblemished love!

The author is a hypocrite. I do not understand why it is necessary to add a policy here. By insulting the Russians, but at the same time his country itself is no better.

Hehe~ boy

is the chapter coming out today?

I can't wait to continue this work. She's gorgeous in every sense. Every chapter makes me want more. The idea of the work is very interesting and distinguishes it from other works. I hope for regular output of chapters so that I can continue to enjoy this work.

Thanks for the chapter

when is the renewal?

But why exactly is the main character able to get them. You wrote that he would be an average person of this world. That he would be different from other young masters. I thought he would justify his actions. Instead, he became another person with spermatoxicosis. His goal to explore the world has changed to fuck every hole.

When I started reading this work, the author made me think that this would be an interesting kriga. In the story, the main character will go a different way, will find something new. But instead I saw another story about another young master. I flattered myself with the hope that the author would write something good. But he needed to kill the main character of the main story to give gg all the women. Just because.

A well-founded version of events. The separation from Alice, as for me, hurt Sieverus very much. I do not know how the memories of the original influenced the current one, but if he took into account those feelings when he loved Lily, then you can make a great story out of it. To beat the heart twice. Will he be able to love again. As for me, he lacks a friend.

A well-founded version of events. The separation from Alice, as for me, hurt Sieverus very much. I do not know how the memories of the original influenced the current one, but if he took into account those feelings when he loved Lily, then you can make a great story out of it. To beat the heart twice. Will he be able to love again. As for me, he lacks a friend.

Not gey

Very interesting work. Will there be elements from the Edge Runner? I'm waiting for some updates. The main character is very attracted by his behavior, unlike the stereotypical seekers of women and those who depend on the system.

this thought does not leave me. What if we have a war for the Holy Grail in Orario? Choose masters and servants. that would be unrealistically cool.

I am very disappointed with this work. Mainly because of the cowardice of the author. It's as if he's afraid to change the plot, but at the same time he tries to cram something new into it. It doesn't make any sense at all. In fact, the original plot will be better than what the author has crammed into his work. What's the point of writing fan fiction if you're so afraid to change the plot. Just so that in the end the main character will stick every woman or girl at work?

I have read more than 180 chapters and my opinion about this work. The main character is an empty-headed idiot. He creates problems for himself and heroically overcomes them. He stupidly depends on the system and does not try to do anything himself. He doesn't train, he doesn't explore a new world. All he does is fuck and boost stats like in a game. The plot is based on the fact that wait until the full fuck comes, and only then will the hero appear and save everyone. Naive and stupid, does not see anything beyond what is in front of his eyes. it is as if he is already walking along the Protopton road past everyone, without turning off it a single step. The book is good in principle, but in fact it's just a set of cliches and cliches.

Despite the comments, I still decided to read this work. And meey gets the feeling that the author did all this shit with Lily purely for the sake of the plot. He spat at the readers simply because he wanted to and he didn't come up with anything better. Even now, the author justifies Paul in order to simply follow the plot. Why was it necessary to build a relationship with Lily in order to eventually do just that. And now he's stupidly trying to reconcile his parents. I just have one question. What for? The main character is a rag and only slightly different from the original Rudius. He knew the plot and didn't change anything.

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