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Comments of chapter undefined of A ninja who is always hungry

kiwill
kiwillLv1kiwill

What a great story I really didn't think it would be so good when I started reading it thanks for all the chapters but keep writing good short but very entertaining fanfics

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Anonny_Anonymous
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Thank you for giving us an ending. I really enjoyed your fic. Too bad he didn’t get to fight Madara, but let’s be real: any intelligent self-insert wouldn’t let it even get to that point. A lot of authors have the MC in Naruto fics stick to canon even concluding in the 4th Shinobi War. Glad you did something different.

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MythicalFanFicGod
MythicalFanFicGodLv4MythicalFanFicGod

Thanks for the story, this was an amazing ride - though the ending was abrupt and we didn't even meet Kaguya, it was great.

Petang
PetangLv13Petang

Thank you for this amazing journey, thank you thank you thank you. !!!

Reistlan
ReistlanLv3Reistlan

.... This is the end???? Besides that there was many water in chapters - story was good. But this last chapter....

Everton_Azevedo
Everton_AzevedoLv1Everton_Azevedo

Seria legal uma nova aventura com um personagem com poderes semelhante (poderes relacionados a comida) só que no mundo de my hero academy. De qualquer forma agradeço pela história.

Hemanth_Chandra
Hemanth_ChandraLv3Hemanth_Chandra

hello, this is my pov canon is meant for future of shinobi world, the ending of canon brings the entire world a revolution of unity and peace. hence it's a perfect ending and usually preferred but I think with his heavenly food and all, within some timeskips itself, it could become a giant and support the entire world by becoming a pivot for peace, you know. if you're on a war, you can't get my food. i also particularly don't like the ending, you killed jirariya for future plans or something but later it was only some 10 or so chapters,etc. it was all pretty fast forwarded after that, so ya, not a good ending last point is you didn't write the endings of story of other characters , like Naruto and sasuke and all. it was only a brushup. would've liked a better sketch and emotion.

HalfazHipocrite
HalfazHipocriteLv3HalfazHipocrite

I vote Kabuto slipped in the bathtub… or was hit by a train. (What?!! plenty of good people have died by getting hit by a train!) I refuse to believe Bush jr was a better survivor then Kabuto. (Almost choked to death by snack food!) Also Sasuke needs to die by some yandere! Also “author”. How did we not get a horrible omake of what “body fluid” that The Senju took… By any and all means I enjoyed the story.[img=recommend]

Dagom
DagomLv4Dagom

thanks for the chapter. obrigado pelo capítulo. arigato

Bored_Reader_111
Bored_Reader_111Lv4Bored_Reader_111

Thanks for the chapter

Arthur_Blazer
Arthur_BlazerLv3Arthur_Blazer

Please release a second part as long as you have the courage and can, the story is very cool, although it had certain errors but it was good for the most part, I also like the protagonist, he is not super broken, overpower but not weak either, he is neutral, he will kill if he sees it necessary, nor is it a genocide that kills everyone without giving room for conversation. Another point is that at the same time he won't be stupid taking girls like Pokemon, you just need to improve more conversations and interactions, I would say, or issues with English. I have to say that Toriko's power is very interesting.

Darksied
DarksiedLv5Darksied

Thanks for the amazing story!!!

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

Gracias por el capítulo genial

Granville4554
Granville4554Lv15Granville4554

Thanks for the chapters 🙏

KingBing96
KingBing96Lv14KingBing96

Kinda hoping he does a boruto one so that we can see the family and growth of his clan then just follow his kid’s adventures next you know?

cyan_wolf
cyan_wolfLv4cyan_wolf

thank you author san

Zer0Glory
Zer0GloryLv14Zer0Glory

Another one to the completed library. Thank you for another worthy addition.

shypunk
shypunkLv11shypunk

3 stones as a farewell to this fic

shypunk
shypunkLv11shypunk

thank you for the fic dude hope to see other fics you write later

smasher2018
smasher2018Lv6smasher2018

Thanks for the story!!