Cadenadeaventuras
Thank you for giving us an ending. I really enjoyed your fic. Too bad he didn’t get to fight Madara, but let’s be real: any intelligent self-insert wouldn’t let it even get to that point. A lot of authors have the MC in Naruto fics stick to canon even concluding in the 4th Shinobi War. Glad you did something different.
hello, this is my pov canon is meant for future of shinobi world, the ending of canon brings the entire world a revolution of unity and peace. hence it's a perfect ending and usually preferred but I think with his heavenly food and all, within some timeskips itself, it could become a giant and support the entire world by becoming a pivot for peace, you know. if you're on a war, you can't get my food. i also particularly don't like the ending, you killed jirariya for future plans or something but later it was only some 10 or so chapters,etc. it was all pretty fast forwarded after that, so ya, not a good ending last point is you didn't write the endings of story of other characters , like Naruto and sasuke and all. it was only a brushup. would've liked a better sketch and emotion.
I vote Kabuto slipped in the bathtub… or was hit by a train. (What?!! plenty of good people have died by getting hit by a train!) I refuse to believe Bush jr was a better survivor then Kabuto. (Almost choked to death by snack food!) Also Sasuke needs to die by some yandere! Also “author”. How did we not get a horrible omake of what “body fluid” that The Senju took… By any and all means I enjoyed the story.[img=recommend]
Please release a second part as long as you have the courage and can, the story is very cool, although it had certain errors but it was good for the most part, I also like the protagonist, he is not super broken, overpower but not weak either, he is neutral, he will kill if he sees it necessary, nor is it a genocide that kills everyone without giving room for conversation. Another point is that at the same time he won't be stupid taking girls like Pokemon, you just need to improve more conversations and interactions, I would say, or issues with English. I have to say that Toriko's power is very interesting.