Maybe Susan Storm cause I don’t see another love interest having already being introduced. Definitely don’t think he’ll go after Sage considering he thinks of her like family.

Hope to see this fic up and going again.

Eh doesn’t really matter pushing the timeline a bit in either directions as long as it follows the events that pop up

Totally agree and cool I was actually looking forward to where this story went

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I kinda hope you do stories for any of those I’d definitely like to see what you’d change

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Now that we’re caught up I wonder how it’ll go from here I’m very excited to see this story develop more

Pretty sure it’s Draco’s mom no other reason to feel guilty besides that unless you gender bent Draco. 🤷‍♂️ Plus context would prove it has something to do with the Black family also really hinting at Narcissa.

I’m actually really enjoying this story I hope to see more soon. Really wanna see how it develops further especially if he decides to be a hero of earth or something that would be really interesting. Thanks for the chapters

Cool cause it’d really suck to have all his abilities and not be able to see out of one of his eyes.

Honestly I would’ve thought that through the group chat system he could’ve made that Titans eye his own by now. Anakin has honestly always acted like a child throwing a tantrum. I hope that through your story his character has a chance to grow past that. I’m on the fence whether Anakin is really worth the trouble though but Shepard is kind in the same boat honestly. 🤷‍♂️ thanks for the chapter though the story is interesting.

Dang I don’t think it was that bad it wasn’t really that fast paced you skipped over things that didn’t really need to be covered. Just explain that he did. Even now with the last chapter he got the metal bending down quick probably cause he really talented. Plus he already knew it was possible from seeing the avatar series. Heck took still beats him in talent cause she got that stuff down pretty quickly.

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I kinda had an inkling from the MC’s name. Became a bit more solid when the fire ending popped up. It is pretty cool how you tied it all together looking forward to this stories development.

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I mean if you feel like you want to continue you should continue the story. I’ve found it pretty entertaining so far. It would be interesting to see a version of it with the other pathway he could’ve chosen. If you feel like you hit a block though I’d say either put this one on hiatus or drop it which would also be your choice.

I’d suggest going back and writing each point given to the mc in a word document or something so that you don’t improve the mc with false stats. Cause I could’ve sworn you did add points for defeating the chain dude. Also just now you gave him an extra because before the spar you had zeroed his points. Hopefully by documenting it and maybe labeling why he got the points will help keep it as a steady grow for the mc. Thank you for the story btw it’s actually pretty cool and I look forward to who’s magic he copies. Suggestion on that would be find one that could possibly push his current magic to a new height. It’d be pretty cool to see his grimoire evolve to a 5 clover one through a devil. Especially if it’s compatible with his lightning magic.