Comments of chapter undefined of God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

also he's kind of out of his psychopath with no feeling character.

So far, so good. This would be a good read even if there's no possible transmigration/regression.

this chapter gives us plenty of insights about the mc's character already. great stuff!

He became someone with no sense of remorse and enjoys killing monsters. To him now, grinding his levels and surviving was more important

the story pace is going smooth and making story really exciting but there's lack of detailing if you could add details like his feelings and his emotions like he ran out of breath or yk smth which shows his emotion instead of simply telling it otherwise than this everything is awesome but yeah chapter is again too lengthy

Thanks for the chap

You should try to make the descriptions shorter and make the fights longer.

The chapters could be edited and fixed and they would be perfect.

Why do we know these peoples names without them actually introducing themselves? Ima say it one more time EXPOSITION is KILLING the potential of this story. There should be way more interactions especially if this is going to be a kill feast like i think it is. Give these meatbags some characterization so we can care when they ultimately die! Please i beg of you. You got about 2 chapters worth of content cramped into one. Your starting to give some characterization to whom i assume will be the love interest Susan which is nice these little nuance moments needs to be carried over to the other characters. I promise it will pay off in the long run.

For a self-proclaimed psychopath, he's uncharacteristically showing a lot of emotion and care for the safety and well-being of others in this chapter.