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Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones: The First Elven King

ImmortalWhiteNight
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thanks for the chapter and looking forward to seeing more of this world🌎 ps: he can give his nobles mountains as a fiefdom and they can build castles like the ones in the photo

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PixelPawzBR
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Before the rest of my comment!!!! For the Discord link, add me on there and I'll send your way. WN won't let us share link in comments. Angie AG#9447 ... Moving on! It's never you by yourself, you have me. I might be short, but I am stronk. :D If not stronk, at least I am wily. XD <3 But yeah, this is the best way to deal with losers like that. Most of them are just the Draco Malfoy's of the internet. Either that or they're the bad kind of nerd. Good nerds are just nerds who love what they love and get hyped. Bad nerds are nerds who are like "I say" in a nerdy voice and post a novel themselves about how wrong something is. I normally just tell them to get a girl for once, will do them good. XD Okay, so now that all of that is out of the way. *deep breath* I love Deepdown. :o I would totally live there. The detail is so pretty. I wonder if one day I can paint scenes from your story... It's my goal. <3 Also, I love the unicorns SO much. Still hope Aren is a true bro. He's too nice to be a bad guy, I hope. ;.; Everything about this was wonderful and I loved being able to have my little warm fuzzy happy ritual of reading a new chapter! *another deep breath* Finally... *quietly* Remember that Vaela needs a unicorn. And that I love you! <3

VINCI88
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So the Regallyons are going to hide the possession of the Dragons? I guess it will be a nice surprise for Aegon. Anyway, I hope Kael uses special spells to allow only his people to enter this land.

Morgan_Sinn_2309
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Honestly, really looking forward to how this will play out. I’m really looking forward to how Kael will either expand or renovate deepdown to build his castle/keep or maybe his Valyrian Tower?

Newnoob
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Yo author how many chapters till Valyria goes bye bye?? Also can you write a pov from one of the children of forest, just want to see how they feel about MC conquering them.

Aldrighi
AldrighiLv13Aldrighi

Aw yeah, time to build a kingdom baby.

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PrimalWhiteStar
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Really thanks for the Chapter...I was needing it, your story is one of the few that I wait with trepidation EVERY morning. Keep writing and don't worry about Heaters on the site...these are people who doesn't have anything to do other than firing bad comments or just don't understand what they are saying since for them are just words on a keyboard...not words on real life and how they can influence you... soo Thank you for this story and your fantasy! Cheers đŸ» . . . p.s. send your Discord so we can follow you

Ash_born01
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Hi I just recently started reading your story. I have to say that I enjoy reading your work and hope you keep it up. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Just to be clear do you release your chapter daily or weekly.

Gorath13
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I'm all hyped up! a question though; is the entire grassland surrounded by mountains? how would people reach there?

Old_Wolf
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Thnx for the chapter and i gotta say, i am enjoying this magical feeling of wonder you are creating. Not only have you added the politics that is essential for the theme that is game of thrones, you also added your own take on the lore which is alluring and wondrous enough that it leaves me wanting more. As the Story slowly unveils, it leaves more of my imagination to run wild. Im sure you are going to add some kingdom building which will show growth aS the story continues which is also ‘cool’ to read. Overall, this work has great potential and it saddens me to hear you get attacked and i hope my support can atleast dimInish some of that loss of motivation or “spark if you will”. I read a lot of stories and i have seen plenty of writers given up to due some of the audience expressing their distaste but i can say for certain it is these people that are not only selfish in telling you how to write but also cant appreciate a story for all its worth even if they try. Readers have different tastes and i can understand if they move on but to also discredit is somewhat similar to someone throwing a tantrum. Dont take their words to heart and humor them. Thanks again for your story.

DragouN
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testerer
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i am so divided on where to put my stones, in this one or the anakin is vader one... theyre both sooo good in theyre own ways... but since your dissin them SJWs as much as we do... you get my third stone author

LordAion
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It's normal to get beat up by these idiots, but you'll realize that all an author needs is a reader who likes their story and sometimes just the author liking what they're writing is enough. From this chapter on, I'll thank you whenever I remember, so you know I like your work. Note: Just a little rant, the only flaw of this novel in my opinion is that the protagonist transmigrated and not reincarnated. Since, if the character does not transmigrate in his own body, I am very uncomfortable with the reasons that the authors give for a soul to assume the body they took, there were only two stories that managed to convince me. One of them was Supreme Magus, and the other one I don't remember the name of, but the moment the guy died, the boy he took the body from was doing necromantic magic.

RaijinGod
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Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

I'm really excited about your story, thanks for the chapter, really looking forward to the next one I want to see soon how he is going to build his city in this valley and at what point of development we will be when we get to the period that has passed in the prologue

IDragonXYZ
IDragonXYZLv6IDragonXYZ

Nice

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFanLv5TheSystemFan

Thanks for the chapter

Travis_Btmb
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Thanks for the chapter

DaoistuQngeZ
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Do you personally believe that the origin of Valyrian was that they used to be a shepherd?

Naturesin
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thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for the heart te to be cut down for a elven world tree to be planted