Chapter three and there's already a flashback ... I wonder why fanfic authors started to use this. It's sh*t. Have you ever seen a flashback in a professionally written book? Never like that
The Japanese honorifics are awful in this fic. That family is not Japanese. Theyâre not in Japan. They donât speak that way. Rias only spoke that way because she was into anime and she was in Japan at the time.