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Comments of chapter undefined of Established Pinnacle: The Enigma

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Daniel_Lee_1421
Daniel_Lee_1421Lv1Daniel_Lee_1421

Realm is too messy to the point where is is unreadable, too many unnecessary details. You could've have just made power systems tier wise like tier 1,tier 2.... And you can make every 3 tier a league and similarly name it league 1, league 2...... Also no need to name all tier and only name league. Make tier and league as a Base system and change it's name depending on era, like league 4 in one era can be called godlin , in another era it can be called lesser god , semi god in another era but still use league no in front of their name so user can easily understand you and power level. Instead of godlin, lesser god , demigod use league 4 godlin, league 4 lesser god. Use tier as sub realm like tier 10 can be tier 1 godlin, tier 11 can be tier 2 godlin...And combine them League 4 tier one godlin OR SIMPLY USE TIER 10 to make it simple for user to understand. Also you can make realms system of current era as standard to use them regularly and only use above mentioned rule when introducing realm name of other era. OR SIMPLY USE ONLY 1 REALM SYSTEM. Anyway main point being, make your realm name uniform and easy to understand. I've read almost 50 chapter and still I don't know who is strong? Greater diety or godlin. To confusing and too messy.

Lady_Nine_Tails
Lady_Nine_TailsAuthorLady_Nine_Tails

Yeah, I've stopped the novel for now, as I'm working on fixing that, as well as how to properly and smoothly integrate all main characters into the story, etc... Thank you for the well detailed review, or comment, its one of a kind, as I rarely receive any... Again, I'll work on that, but for now, I'm focusing on my other book more. To finalize, Thank you Danial~

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SirJuan_Juan
SirJuan_JuanLv14SirJuan_Juan

Good looking forward to reading Quick question How does league differentiate between Realms? i am a little confused?