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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
    Daniel_Lee_14213mth
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    Very disappointing First volume is okay but second volume was bad with nonsense competition after competition especially after chapter 140 it is outright trash as It seems to have to written by ai chat bot.

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    Immortal Supreme: Sovereign of the Grand Dao
    Fantasy · Victor_Vaden
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    Realm is too messy to the point where is is unreadable, too many unnecessary details. You could've have just made power systems tier wise like tier 1,tier 2.... And you can make every 3 tier a league and similarly name it league 1, league 2...... Also no need to name all tier and only name league. Make tier and league as a Base system and change it's name depending on era, like league 4 in one era can be called godlin , in another era it can be called lesser god , semi god in another era but still use league no in front of their name so user can easily understand you and power level. Instead of godlin, lesser god , demigod use league 4 godlin, league 4 lesser god. Use tier as sub realm like tier 10 can be tier 1 godlin, tier 11 can be tier 2 godlin...And combine them League 4 tier one godlin OR SIMPLY USE TIER 10 to make it simple for user to understand. Also you can make realms system of current era as standard to use them regularly and only use above mentioned rule when introducing realm name of other era. OR SIMPLY USE ONLY 1 REALM SYSTEM. Anyway main point being, make your realm name uniform and easy to understand. I've read almost 50 chapter and still I don't know who is strong? Greater diety or godlin. To confusing and too messy.

    Ch -4 Glossary 1 - Realms & Ranks
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    Established Pinnacle: The Enigma
    Fantasy · Lady_Nine_Tails
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    "As it turned out, the Rule Source Crystal hidden inside the strange little box was actually a Space Source Crystal. It was indeed a very rare Rule Source Crystal that Ye Xiao obtained after the Gravity Source Crystal." Did author have amnesia, didn't he mention that space rule crystal is in hand of heavenly demon, now how come fang Yun father has it?

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    " One hundred times gravity was a staggering figure, a level that even a so-called King of Chaos might struggle to endure." Those motherfuker capable of even destroying thousands of universe with sneeze can't even withstand 100 time gravity???? WTF. What kind of logic is that, or is there Even an ounce of logic in this book?

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    Source universe which is hundreds of billion of light year is like a dust in chaos, chaos is too big. Yet why does retard author used ten thousand miles or millions of kilometers to describe big thing in chaos. In chaos even trillion light year should be like a speck of dust. That is not earth it is chaos where strong people can see or even teleport trillion light year in second, yet author still uses sentences like " Chaos is too big, and covering the entire Chaos with his Divine Sense is impossible. However, there is still a chance to locate a Land in the range of several million miles in the Void of Chaos." " Ye Xiao first took a deep breath. Now that he was a Chaos Sovereign, his Divine Sense could even penetrate the Void of Chaos and scan several million miles of area easily. " Million mile is too little even distance between sun and earth is 91 million mile , it's not earth or even universe it's chaos use quintillion light year to measure distance or big mountain, you make it fell like Chaos is as big as solar system.

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
    Daniel_Lee_14213mth
    Posted

    How dumb and illogical do you want the story be be?? Author : yes *******This is just to make it 140 character, do not mind.******

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    Why does mc seems to be Fukien clueless about fighting and survival when he is reincarnation of old cultivator. Did he struggle in source universe for nothing?? Did he not learn a fuckin thing.

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    Mc bastard can devour other creatures to increase his cultivation but that mf never uses it.

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    Fuckin bastard went to secret realm to obtain treasure but when he obtained celestial destroyer grade treasure, that bastard hasn't even seen let alone use it . Mc has 1000 different ways to become stronger but he won't use it and and then cry like a bitch on how weak he is .

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    Is mc an punching bag, why does everyone come to Puch him like trash bag and then mc let's them go even though he can kill them. It's Fukien frustrating.

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
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    Why does mc always let people that wanted to kill him live???

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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  • Daniel_Lee_1421
    Daniel_Lee_14213mth
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    I've only read up to chapter 100 but it is enough for me to know that it is garbage. Here are some things that I was never able to understand. _ Mc should be reincarnation of thousands year old monster but he acts like a toddler who hasn't seen the world of cultivation _ Mc has most powerful background on the world he lives in but that fuckin shit never used it. _mc has ability to devour other to cultivate but that fuckin bastard doesn't do it , instead he goes to some random secret realm to get treasure to do the same fucking thing. _ mc family has biggest Library in that world(most likely) but that bastard spends year in some back ward city collecting exercise to create his own method, just fucking go to your house and use your own bigger library. _ mc can one shot some assassin's but the retard author makes mc spend 4-5 chapter to harm them and then that fucking retard let's them go. _ why is mc spending shit ton of time to get treasure that can let those below spirit fusion realm reborn when he has enough treasure to reach saint realm, when he obtain the treasure he'll be too strong and won't be able to use it _ mc and author are doing their best to delay mc cultivation, that bastard doesn't even bother to take any resources and give them to girls for no reason, he doesn't feel like reincarnation of old cultivator. _why does mc want to go to secret realm to get treasure, when he can just ask his family, his family is super rich and strong but he never uses them . _ why doesn't mc goes to his family and use their resources to grow stronger but spends time in place where bird doesn't shit , and struggle with other commoner.

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    King Of Chaos
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
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