Comments of chapter undefined of I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)

i cant understand your obsession to make marcy became the last vampire and also be a vampire queen, after all it doesnt make sense that she became the one bitten by hierophant, after all hierophant did that to get revenge for marceline in og timeline, but here its Mc the one that almost exterminate the Vampires, it would be a Better revenge for Hierophant to Turn mc into the being he hates very much + Force him to be inmortal and watch the love of his life (marceline) get old and die. why whould he bite marceline? unless mc Bcame the Vampire king as he should and then he turn her into a vampire to avoid her growing old

🇧🇷 This chapter seems shorter than the previous one. And where is the confrontation? Shouldn't that be the title of the chapter? Where is the fight? Where is the blood? Where is the confrontation? No offense, but all that time not writing has left you rusty, author. The chapter's sparse word count, shallow conversations, superficial descriptions, and numerous grammatical errors left much to be desired in this chapter. Don't be in a hurry to post the story. Just take your time to improve everything you can until you're happy with what you have. No one likes a rushed story. 🇧🇷

🇧🇷 Thanks for posting again, author. The chapter is quite short and there are some very simple typos, but it's not too bad. I recommend practicing writing by looking at other stories with long chapters and good descriptions. But each has its own writing style. 🇧🇷

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Thanks for the chapter!

Gracias por el capítulo 👍

Thx for a chapter

anyway thx for coming back i missed this

Once again, thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter 🥰

Thanks for the great chapter! Looking forward to more!