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Comments of chapter undefined of I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)

Boolkas1
Boolkas1Lv15Boolkas1

please don't stop writing this

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daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

Also if blanche turned into the New Vampire king of this new Era he will gain an Important And cualitative Boost up rather than being turned a vampire by Marceline, blanche needs that boost up, marceline can easily catch up to him devouring souls. imagine the Important power up Psysically and Spiritually he will get after that. Also it is poethic, think about ''The hero that slayed every last Vampire from the face of OOO had a tragic destiny after being turned into a Vampire, become the monster he once sware to slay, but unlike others may think he didnt submit the new darkness inside him, but he rather use this new Curse and turned it into a Gift for him and the whole OOO Becoming the Eternal Hero of OOO fighitng Darkness with darkness'' it is kinda cool, also he will gain the Vampire King title and the oficial powers he will get to be the last Vampire and new king of this new era.

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Leef_Power
Leef_PowerLv1Leef_Power

What do you mean I want you to hurt. author, what are you going to do? don't play with my heart please

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daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

i love the cha but i was thinking and If you are about to turn Marceline into a Vampire Queen i will Recomend you Not to do that, it whouldnt make sense. Let me Explain Why. 1) The Vampire king in the orginial Canon decided to Turn Marceline into a Vampire because he knew he was going to lose and all the vampires will Extinguished with him, So his vengeance for marceline is Turn her into the monster he hated the most and sware to kill, forcing her to live with the essence of the Vampires the rest of her Now Inmortal Life. In this Timeline Blanche was the one that Killed them, humilliated them and is about to extinguished them, So the vampire king here Hates Blanche not marceline, The one he wants to turn is Blanche. Of course you can argue that turning marceline into a vampire can also be a way to punish blanche turning the love of his life into the monster he most hate, BUT that is not the best way to get Revenge from Blanche, The Perfect revenge for the Vampire king is to turn Blanche into a Vampire king not only turning him into the monster he sware to Slay but also, forcing him to live his now Inmortal Life as the monster he hate and also putting blanche into a hard situation since now Blanche needs to A) Live his inmortal life and watching the love of his life Marceline age and get old until she dies and he has to live eternally mourning her or force on her and turn her into the monster he once hate, either way the Vampire king has striked a ''Blow'' that will affect Blanche's inmortal life forever even after his death. so it makes more sense for him to Turn Blanche and not marceline

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Starcat777
Starcat777Lv4Starcat777

He already lost his father to a crown and always fighting monster just by himself so i think he’s got a bunch of character growth so don’t make somethink bad happen between them.

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KingParadox
KingParadoxLv1KingParadox

I can only imagine that you develop their relationship and separate them in some forced way up to the canon which is hundreds of years.

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welcome_7920a
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keke171
keke171Lv4keke171

ty for the chapter I think people are afraid of NTR because in the (SPOILER A FRONT) in original adventure time marceline ends up with the bubblegum princess, it's not very explicit but there's a kiss and the creators confirmed the relationship (END OF SPOILER)

BTOOOM_18
BTOOOM_18Lv4BTOOOM_18

Now I feel that the good is coming, but now I feel sad about a possible separation. I like both of them as a couple.

Standy_Victorov
Standy_VictorovLv3Standy_Victorov

....so what are the options for Blanche to increase his lifespan? because for now he has a normal human life, meaning he will die in less than 100 years.....being biten doesn't sound good given that there are a lot of disadvantages of being a normal vampire....and why do I have the feeling that the author will make Blanche go with Tom to the human islands and abandon Marcy again?

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Whitestair_Ivory
Whitestair_IvoryLv4Whitestair_Ivory

Do you really have to force character growth through psychological trauma or emotional pain? Why not just let them be happy? Atleast for couple of years or maybe dozens of it.

Dagon_vcg
Dagon_vcgAuthorDagon_vcg

I think people are exaggerating a bit, it will only be a 'bit' painful for the mc, more character development baby

Dagon_vcg
Dagon_vcgAuthorDagon_vcg

when I said it would be in the next chapter? I just said it would hurt a little, a couple of years to go

SaishoMysteriarch
SaishoMysteriarchLv4SaishoMysteriarch

Okay so while I do understand why he wants to limit himself author you should try to frame it differently because as it stands he is basically saying that he will completely abandon all his other abilities which will but a big cap on his power for no reason. and it's a bit excessive for him to only use them in desperate last efforts as even then he will be out of practice and might not be able to use them as effectively.

TheBananaMan
TheBananaManLv14TheBananaMan

Relationships take time, so take your time author.

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

A unicorn is going to try and eat the MC again

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Claudian_D_Amazon
Claudian_D_AmazonLv4Claudian_D_Amazon

so if something bad is going to happen to them I'll leave this story now, have good luck with your story author.

Leonardo_Cortez
Leonardo_CortezLv5Leonardo_Cortez

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Slayer76
Slayer76Lv4Slayer76

It’s always NTR on this site, no couple can just ‘break up’.

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Winter_slayer
Winter_slayerLv4Winter_slayer

Bom, muito bom. Estou ansioso para ver o desenvolvimento da relação deles e as piadas no meio do caminho. Muito obrigado pelo.

LazySloth_00
LazySloth_00Lv14LazySloth_00

Will he also be with princess bubbleg ?um