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Really loved the chapter xD specially because it totally make sense, for jen is already too dificult to have a boyfriend, and her prospects wont get better with her future daugther forcing her to date the furry guy, the alien elastic guy that will cheat on her, the asian tennis guy that although it seems like a good boyfriend, he simply doesnt belong to that world, the 2 alien princes that wants to marry her to use her for conquer, MC ita basically so perfect for her, she felt the urgy to marry him, which its normal due to 1)how much demand mc has AND will have 2)he lives in a whole diferent universe, she had to take her chance
Don't listen to those harem sect comments author, this is perfect, Charmcaster hasn't even showed up and like you said yourself, she requires a lot of time to solve her daddy issues and It's simply not worth it, it's not like Jen doesn't have her own inner demons. Please don't regret this chapter or try to make this a harem, i can feel you slipping, please don't give up to the harem sect pressure, this is perfect just like it is
Im not against infinkte edwards but only if not all of them are in mc's world visit, since it would lose the point to see mc create a name fothimself there, actually it might even be bad for mc since the enemies of edwatd kenway will point him and ramona and he wouldnt noticed or be sttobg enough to defend aginst the embush
I dont care a lot about knifes and young neil, i just didnt want her to be kick out if the group once they broke up. Im more worried about KimxScott, lets be honest without Ramona, kim is the best replace Scott has for a soulmate, right now and with mcs ilussion magic scott can grow for better and date kim, he is not the kid he was before.
Hmm i dont know about mc meeting cyberpunk edward, when i thiught about infinite edwards i thought more bout diferent scott vs the world edwards, the original edwards that didnt die and got another person transmigrated, thats what i meant about og timeline, the prime scottvstheworld universe where everything happend like canon
As for the Infinite Edwards, well im okay with that BUT only if you make Edward being the strongest one among them, of course the singularity path its also easier, but im okay with anything as long as mc stands out. Also the idea of MC going to OG scottVstheworld timeline is interesting.
Wow okay a lot of things to comment, first of all epic chapter the interactions were great and the romance was perfect, glad you choose that song, personally it fits perfectly with ramona, and seeing how they naturally evolve their relationship by moving in together its just perfect. Next Step would be marry, but its too soon right now, maybe after 2 or 3 years top, considering how good they are for one another. Also love the pairings ScottxKim, maybe you can even do a Juliexstephen and NeilxKnifes after this.
While i love that they revelaed their secrets i dont like how short it is, i m not asing for drama but try to show lian's thoughts, her astonishment and admiration towards mc's past world and experiences, see how she loves the fact they are too similar, it was here but really shortten. anyway, love the chapter, cant wait to see more
Bro eve its like a female Dr manhattan, of course she is important the thing is she had a psicological Chain that doesnt let her create life or manipulate biology, the writers nerf her and never explain why didnt mark and eve tried to unlock this chain, its just a psicological chain, something with their tech and resources could have got rid of, i hope you do this