MC's personality takes me away from the story.

Well, it's not like your words are worth much, after all all your stories so far have been discontinued in some way.

but will there be new chapters? Or will it stop again like last time?

I'm curious what the course of this story will be now with the news that came out in the game's DLC...

kkkkkk this story doesn't make any sense, he just needs to think of something and get that right for a wish fulfillment FF this one is very broken

what a meh plot.

man there is no valid reason for the way he was treated until now, history gives me a strange feeling, ew

Dude, are all adults really going to treat MC that badly? bizarre

Man, writing is not for you, there is no dedication to what you are doing.

unlimited energy...meh

meh

a hidden gem in this app and website, can't wait for more.

You're happy bro, but of course these comments of mine are more me getting the frustration out of my system than anything, of course I want his personality to improve, but I know you have plans for him Your story, I hope I didn't offend you in any way, your story is without a doubt excellent.

1,2,3. Yes, I chose more than one 🫡

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Well, I'll be honest, the moment the MC got this personality, I simply skipped the chapters, reading only superficially, it's incredible how this personality gives a feeling that I'm everything involving the MC is a lie, false.I find it disappointing, this is also very frustrating and the way the story goes, probably another 200 to see any improvement in this, MC would probably sacrifice people around him because of how i indifferent is being portrayed, just let it accumulate a few chapters to see if it lifts the spirits because it kind of cooled down with this problem, at least for me anyway.

This MC's personality is ruining everything that has been done so far, it's sad to see...

? same chapter? repeated?

Dude two chapters of pure filler, two large chapters that don't advance anything, strange feeling reading.

Man how did it get so bad in just 4 chapters, for me it ends here, good luck with the story