Comments of chapter undefined of House of The Dragon: Dovahkiin

not sure what to think honestly it feels pointless to write this as the other book isn't finished yet and is heating up and really good and to move Ragnar back in time for no real reason might as well just do a fresh start with Ragnar having arrived 90ac rather then sent back just my opinion

another GOT trash story where the MC despite being strong and have a capabilities to be independent decided to be a good little slave to the idiotic house of stark dickriding the stark so bad why not be independent? there's literally no reason to swear an oath to a weaklings but nope he gotta be subservient gotta be good little cuck to house that isn't even strong enough to pose a threat to him

if you drop the other one

Think I'll stick to the other one. Wish you would have just started him over instead of making a Dragon Break happen.

A house that ruled the north for 8,000 years really thinks that the north doesn't have betrayals and schemes lol, just because eddard and his family were terrible at politics and scheming, people think they are very different from the south. The north is indeed much more united than the south but even so House Bolton held Winterfell, the Vale army along with some smaller houses from the north helped Jon Snow and the wildlings to take it back, while the Boltons, Karstark and Umber fought back. against the Starks.

Great chapter I enjoy reading both your works so please keep typing new chapters. Also does he still know how to make valyrian/ skysteel if so good. Please keep on writing.

is kinda pointless. look dude, moving the character to the past as he is makes the plot a little silly, and as we already have a story working with this same character it becomes more of the same, if you want to write about house of dragon it would be good to create a different context, something like creating a small invasion of oblivion and the protagonist has to prepare Westeros for the attack, or whatever you want, but if you just take the same characters and put them in the past, it's kind of meh

Interesting so far will save judgment till there are a few more chapters out.

The idea is good. Feels too rushed. Could have used a bit more details. This feels like a plug and play. You have to keep in mind this is a whole new fic. I suggest you finish the orginal before anything else. Or atleast prioritise the original fic.

Lowkey more excited for this than ur other ff not saying ur other one is trash but this is a little new

focus on the other one please

Hey you have the giant numbers mixed up. 1000 ish giants but 6000 are children?

Thanks for the chapter 😁 👍 I'm interested to see where this will go. 🤔

I like it👍

is little girl safe ?

Nice

it has a lot of potential

what's independent when he swore an oath

agg you suck again subjugated to house stark for not making their own empire on skagos I leave

pointless my guy