hey do not listen to them all the negative responses to your story I've seen too many times people complained about a good story and your story is good and if anybody thinks that they can make a better story please come on the app and make a better story but don't complain about this one it's good I like the directions it going leave it alone please
wow literally had goosebumps while reading the chapter. man I love your book very much am so sick and tired of systems and cliches settings and most of al know it all mc . it those not fill like a fanfiction if I don't know about asoiaf I would have thought I was your original novel, and this makes me want to read your original novel some day.
Noice. I wonder if the king will give the MC a title/position on the council. After all he is the kings nephew and soon to be son in law, not to mention he's a Dragonrider / a lord and his dragon is probably one of the strongest currently living. Then theirs his wifes dragon and silverwing to factor in which even if it's technically his or his houses dragon it's the mate of his dragon, so yeah 3 dragons to one house has a lot of influence I would say.