Comments of chapter undefined of HP: MAGICAL LIFE

Ahhh come on, i wanted to see the Filthy Muggles Burn.

Well, it seems Grindelwald was right in wanting to burn down the muggle world.

Last chapters are a big letdown Abrupt ending and tragedy/drama in the end without reason

Honestly the last 3 chapters where a big let down to a otherwise amazing story.

Really hoping this is leading into your next novel or something. Otherwise it just leaves a sour taste in a otherwise good novel

I honestly quite liked the ending, felt a bit rushed but it did what alot of other great novels on here never do, and that is, end. Most other novels flounder on trying to fulfill every little thing and end up dying in obscurity, so cudos to you Author for picking a good ending spot and having the decency to do an epilog, I can't wait to read more of your work and thanks for taking all of us ungrateful readers and a great adventure.

and now the world pays.....Thanks for the story,

Thanks for the Great Story

Epilogue was too short and felt abrupt, it could have been divided into 2 chapters

its the best fanfic

i found it interesting the way the epilougue ended usually every fanfic ends on a good note this ended in a tragedy but at the same time feels like a cliffhanger honestly would have loved to see how it unfolded but the mystery of it as irritating as is adds to the ending.

Not a good ending, should have finished with the Triwizard. The last part just leaves a sour taste.

Thanks for a great last chap!

great series

thanks for the story

realy good story hope ther comes a second Story about the futur

Grindewald was always right.

Ok too much time skip.