Madara was able to activate and deactivate his Rinnegan. Natural wielders should be able to, I believe, they just don't for whatever reason. Even Itachi had his Sharingan active all the time.

No some of your earlier chapters were very similar to another Pokemon story, Pokemon: An Unexpected Journey. Your story has gotten a lot better and different than the other one. That one got needlessly edgy and almost GrimDark! Keep up the good work.

Yes, I never imagined the Weasleys to act like how it is portrayed here.

Fullbring arc was one of the most boring arcs in Bleach for me, apart from the fillers. Even some of the fillers were better, like the Muramasa one.

Actually 12 year olds asking those type of questions is not offensive, and I am not sure why but Ron is demonized a lot in Fanfics. He is the least favored child in the family, everything he owns is hand me down. So him asking him for a new wand should not anger Molly as the rest of the children do get things that Ron does not.

Not a good ending, should have finished with the Triwizard. The last part just leaves a sour taste.

I don't know why this story doesn't have enough Power stones. But here is one from me, and I will add a few more in the coming day. Excellent story and a fun read.

Feels like filler in a fanfic.

You just updated the wrong chapter to the wrong story I believe,

Not believable, Yamamoto barely moves, and only acts out very rarely. Furthermore no one was killed or going to be killed.

Why is he going along with everything Urahara says? This feels very different to the one from Fiore. Where he made his own decisions. If he truly doesn't want to interfere he can simply get away right? Furthermore there is no guarantee Kisuke is helping him or using him. He knows that Kisuke is a shady character.

Yes, seems redundant to the story!

I believe it should be Recon, not retcon.

he learn from his grandfather should be learnt from his grandfather. Multiple small mistakes, but good so far. Get a beta or run it through a grammar checking tool

Excellent chapter as usual. Keep up the good work

Ok bye bye

You have made him too powerful for paradise. And there is simply no struggle or jeopardy in anything he does. A good story is when you care for the characters. Here I can totally ignore the chapters till he reaches New world to see if something can threaten him or his crew, which makes me apathetic towards the characters. Power scaling should be very carefully managed in this kind of stories, otherwise it becomes a little boring.

His technique looks like a low powered version of the Kaleidoscope mixed with the denial of nothingness from Fate. Exceptional descriptions though, probably the best JJK story I have read so far.

Too good, but the cliffhanger is killing me here.

Too many crew members makes the story chaotic.