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Comments of chapter undefined of Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!

Stoner_friendly
Stoner_friendlyLv13Stoner_friendly

eh chapter, skipped most

Werph
WerphLv14Werph

i dont think the crew would cry like that so easily. but still a good chap

Pythia
PythiaLv2Pythia

Kinda lack-luster drama if i'm honest. There's no connection. No build up or peak. so it just feels flat. You need fleshed out characters if you want an impact in scenes like this. Thanks for the chapter though just criticism to help improve.

VidDav_FerDeL
VidDav_FerDeLLv4VidDav_FerDeL

Bro they are Cyberpunk/edgerunners so they wouldn't cry over a speech about his mum and dad being dead since losing someone they hold close is pretty much the norm for them but they would sympathize with David since they pretty much knows how losing someone they love feel.David's speech was great tho just that the crews reaction wasn't believable.I feel like the crew would lower their guns and make up with him but still watch over him since what Lucy said is valid considering their line of work.Anyways thx for the chap

Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13Pekokopiko

eh i was waiting for a new chapter and i got this, meh it's fine i guess... at least i got to read something, tho i skip most of it

vtkun
vtkunLv5vtkun

why is he so desperate to stay with this team? if someone pointed a gun at me out of nowhere and in the middle of an mission no less i would not even bother to stay. and correct me if i'm wrong but he doesn't even know the anime so why so attached ?

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BoboPingu
BoboPinguLv5BoboPingu

Rebecca being the only one to cry/tear up and the rest of the crew realising how much hes actually going through without them noticing because of his bright/energetic personality makes more sense to me. But still great chapter, specially Davids speach.

Leydig
LeydigLv4Leydig

Loved the chapter put much needed drama and emotion into the story. Before while entertaining it felt a little like there would be no character development just another to perfect mc.

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o0_SnakeEater_0o
o0_SnakeEater_0oLv1o0_SnakeEater_0o

A little melodramatic but overall good chapter

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wolfgod223
wolfgod223Lv14wolfgod223

thx for the chapter and though the drama came out a little bit I don't know where but for me it was still good and it did make sense how it went down and I can't wait for the next updateđŸ˜đŸ‘đŸŒđŸ‘đŸŒ

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Michemancer_Obi
Michemancer_ObiLv15Michemancer_Obi

Oh ho ho our MC is mortal hmm? Nice powers-check, love interest or two- check, and has a backstory-check Good work Author and good job

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Vanguard801
Vanguard801Lv15Vanguard801

I need my stones to refresh si I can give ya a power stone

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just_s0merand0m9uy
just_s0merand0m9uyLv3just_s0merand0m9uy

YOU make my day bro, you make my day!

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Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

Gotta Protect our new Family, that fkin anime just Akame Ga Killed Me and I was not happy.

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WolfeJuubi
WolfeJuubiLv4WolfeJuubi

Yea I think that’s enough anime for me for awhile.I just finished binging the show and I was so immersed that I felt actual connections to them like I do with naruto,ichigo and kaneki over the time of their character development😅idc what anybody says this show is a masterpiece,I felt geniune loss and sadness especially at the end of the story. Yea Ik I was wayyy too immersed but I fell in love with the show in the first 2 minutes

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Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

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jahmii
jahmiiLv2jahmii

love it as always

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AppleBiscuit
AppleBiscuitLv5AppleBiscuit

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

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Phi0fany_11531
Phi0fany_11531Lv14Phi0fany_11531

nice chapter

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faeeeee
faeeeeeLv4faeeeee

Thanks for the chapter. Loved it đŸ„°

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rabbit_kun
rabbit_kunLv4rabbit_kun

Amazing chapter